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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by uncannybal, Dec 7, 2008.

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  1. Dec 7, 2008 #1
    uncannybal

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    You whisper
    I lose control when I am with you
    I reply
    I love the way you trust me
    You whisper
    You call me just to tell me you miss me
    I reply
    Thats what keeps me going thru the day
    You whisper
    You have everything I want in a man
    I reply
    You create everything good in me. You inspire me
    You whisper
    Why did u steal my heart ?
    I reply
    I need it to keep my blood pumping
    You whisper
    I m lost without you
    I reply
    I found myself in you
     
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  2. Dec 7, 2008 #2
    Chitvish

    Chitvish Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Santosh,

    You say
    I wait for your phone call in office
    I don’t say
    I don’t call you because every call ends!

    You say
    I love the way you speak to me
    I don’t say
    I don’t speak, but my heart does.

    You say
    I love holding you in my hands
    I don’t say
    I don’t like when it all ends.

    You say
    I live only for you
    I don’t say
    I don’t think, I can ever live without you.

    How I wish, somebody said this all to me & my unspoken answers,
    made known to them??

    Love,
    Chithra.
     
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  3. Dec 7, 2008 #3
    Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Santosh,

    This is one of the most beautiful romantic poems I have ever read. Simply superb. Loved it. The message went straight across to the heart of the desired person.


    You say you love the way I trust,
    I say you taught me to

    You say I keep you going thru the day
    I say you are my day

    You say I did everything to inspire you
    I say you made me a woman

    You say there's blood pumping in your heart courtesy me
    I say its not yours but my heart there

    What is found in the process is called love!!




    Love,
    Devika
     
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  4. Dec 7, 2008 #4
    Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow I hope I am allowed hereBig LaughBig Laugh
    3 poets in a row one is super then the other
    each ones hearts speaking out with a lovely answer from the other
    I better not pull both your legs or supermom will come with a stick.......hahahaha
    Now will put few lines which touches you the most from each poem

    Santosh
    You whisper
    Why did u steal my heart ?
    I reply
    I need it to keep my blood pumping

    Supermom
    You say
    I wait for your phone call in office
    I don’t say
    I don’t call you because every call ends!

    You say
    I live only for you
    I don’t say
    I don’t think, I can ever live without you.

    Poetess
    You say I did everything to inspire you
    I say you made me a woman

    You say there's blood pumping in your heart courtesy me
    I say its not yours but my heart there

    :hatsoffto the 3 poets here
     
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  5. Dec 7, 2008 #5
    Chitvish

    Chitvish Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Aruna,
    Now that you have classified me with the great poetess & a reputed writer, I am on [​IMG]
    How do I thank you, Aruna?? I am confused! [​IMG]
    Love,
    Chithra.
     
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  6. Dec 7, 2008 #6
    shvap_786

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    HI uncannybal...
    greatpoem... very nice felt like reading it again and again...

    Dear chitra mam...
    wow enjoyed reading your poem new poetess as aruna said ...

    Dear devika...
    no wonder you are alredy a great poetess...
     
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  7. Dec 8, 2008 #7
    uncannybal

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    Chitra

    You have so much love and it shows in ure poem. Show this to hubby and he will fall off his chair and get more romantic immediately !

    Santosh


     
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  8. Dec 8, 2008 #8
    uncannybal

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    Dearest Devika

    I am glad the message went straight across to the heart of the desired person !

    This was definitely written from the heart and I am glad u loved it

    Heres more



    When I am away

    I crave your touch
    I crave your gaze
    I crave your possesiveness
    I crave your sulk
    I crave to feel you surrender to the sincerity of my love
    I crave to see that twinkle in your eyes
    I crave to watch u brush back your hair
    I crave to hear your quick retorts to my silly questions
    I crave to hear you giggle at my silly jokes
    I crave to feel the reassurance of your presence in my life
    I crave to confide in you and feel your understanding
    I crave to boast to you and feel your appreciation
    I crave to listen to what you have done and be in awe of your talent
    I crave to watch u work and be amazed at your versatility
    I crave to feel your love and your capacity to love those who have wronged you
    I crave to feel your faith and your devotion to God
    I crave you


    Lots of love
    Santosh

     
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  9. Dec 8, 2008 #9
    Arunarc

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    Dear Supermom
    Why confused I think[​IMG]and blessings are more then enough[​IMG]

     
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  10. Dec 9, 2008 #10
    uncannybal

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    Aruna

    Kya yaar again u ask if ure allowed. Maybe I should put a special board outside my blog that says
    Welcome Aruna !

    Thank U Thank U! To put me in the same league as Chitvish and DM is indeed an honour !

    I truly enjoyed writing this and it came from the heart. I am sure that is why u enjoyed it so much !

    Santosh

     
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