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You and I

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by twinsmom, Aug 24, 2007.

  1. twinsmom

    twinsmom Silver IL'ite

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    You and I
    Never tell each other
    How much we mean
    To each other…

    Of course,
    B’days and ’nniversaries
    Do not matter
    They are but perennial
    And pre-emptive …

    And we both
    Don’t believe in
    Mother’s or Father’s Days
    Nor endorse
    All that Valentine’s do!

    Yes, we do bond…
    We gel and we revel
    When we talk shop
    As parents of our kids…

    Where?
    Where do I fit
    In your scheme of things?
    I have often
    Wondered…

    Then… for four nights
    As you tossed
    And turned and whimpered
    In your sleep
    I knew…

    I knew
    I mattered to you
    That you are worried
    That you cared…


    I saw it
    In the relief
    That coursed through
    Your veins, slumping you
    Against the cushions…

    And in your voice
    Thickened with
    Controlled emotion…
    As you repeated the good news!

    And When I found you
    Thanking God
    For sparing me
    I too, prayed to Him
    Thanking Him
    For giving me, You!
     
  2. Rajjo

    Rajjo Junior IL'ite

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    oh wow just wonderful...
     
  3. Jananikrithsan

    Jananikrithsan Gold IL'ite

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    WOW, That was so cute and true.
     
  4. malspie

    malspie Platinum IL'ite

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    A Good one. Keep it up baby..............................
     
  5. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    hai viju,
    i am a very visual person and this is what i have for you, may you and RP have the best in life...sundari
     
    Last edited: Nov 6, 2007
  6. twinsmom

    twinsmom Silver IL'ite

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    Hi sunkan,
    You have mastered in Photoshop????? Amazing stuff...am an ignoramus in this field!:2thumbsup:
     
  7. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Twinsmom,

    Wow. keep the good ones coming.
     
  8. meenu

    meenu Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Twinsmom,
    Vow! Another family poem.,Verynice .
    Regards,
    Meenu
     
  9. rajmiarun

    rajmiarun Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Viju,
    Good and touching one. Keep writng more and more.
     
  10. kanaka Raghavan

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    Very very touching.............
     

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