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Yet another poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malathijagan, Apr 8, 2007.

  1. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Malathi,

    I enjoyed reading this poem too. There is a certain simplicity, clarity and appeal to your poetry. One could almost feel the peace and quiet of the night and the cool breeze.
    But I agree with Cheeniya when he says that let the mornings too bring with it some cheer and hope?! Afterall, all of us should be thankful to wake up to a fresh new day?
    But then, I do not grudge you your freedom to express, which you do beautifully.

    L, Kamla
     
  2. jothi

    jothi Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Malathijagan

    This is a beautiful poem, simple and clear. I have always loved the tranquil hours of the morning. Love to wake up early and have a cup of tea with no one around but just me....

    Regards,
    Jothi.
     
  3. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Thank oyu Jothi for your review of my poem.And if you have a poet in you along with a cuppa tea then Nature's beauty can be imprisoned in words to some extent!
    Rgds,
    Malathi



     

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