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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Mar 7, 2017.

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  1. Jul 11, 2018 #491
    sreeram

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    Haa... I must say, that it's my luck to receive such a comment from a versatile and spontaneous writer like you.

    Waiting for your next series.
     
    sreeram, Jul 11, 2018
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  2. Jul 17, 2018 #492
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    great ending...
     
    sanchu, Jul 17, 2018
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  3. Jul 17, 2018 #493
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    Thanks sanchu :) Have a great day ahead
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 17, 2018
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  4. Aug 7, 2018 #494
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    BB!

    Just finished reading your story! You are a wonderful writer!
    Many things impressed me in the story!
    First thing - it was fresh, authentic, genuine. (I dont want to put more words with same meaning ; ) )
    Yes! It was refreshing and new! You broke the mundane things in many places! Hats off!
    You have got a unique writing style!
    A beautiful relationship between the husband and wife! Wonderfully said and narrated that age is never a barrier for Love. Loved that thought! It was beautiful!
    And bonding between the parents and the boys! Lovely family!
    Overall it was a fresh and beautiful story breaking the mundane things! :blush::blush::blush::blush::blush::blush:
    My best wishes and hugs to you :blush::blush::blush::blush::blush::blush:
     
    IniyaaSri, Aug 7, 2018
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  5. Aug 7, 2018 #495
    blackbeauty84

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    Iniyaa,
    I'm overwhelmed, grateful receiving this generous feedback from a fantastic writer like you. Thank you so much for the feedback dear. I'm so happy you read this. Thanks Thanks.

    Have a great day ahead.
    Loads of love,
    BB84
     
    blackbeauty84, Aug 7, 2018
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  6. Feb 6, 2019 #496
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    @blackbeauty84 Finished 15 chapters.very nice story .Unconditional love seen in Jai's family.super
     
    periamma, Feb 6, 2019
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  7. Feb 7, 2019 #497
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    Many many thanks..Happy to hear you liked the chapters.
     
    blackbeauty84, Feb 7, 2019
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  8. Feb 10, 2019 #498
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    @blackbeauty84 Finished reading the story.Wow Amazing.Fine narration loved the characters .Enjoyed every episode.you are a wonderful writer:clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2::clap2:
     
    periamma, Feb 10, 2019
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  9. Feb 12, 2019 #499
    blackbeauty84

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    Many many thanks for the wonderful feedback mam..Feeling great to receive the feedback.
     
    blackbeauty84, Feb 12, 2019
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