Video Of Me In Draped In Georgette Saree - Critiques Please!!!

Sui, you have a good control of the saree material and are doing most things right. To my untrained eye, it looks like the "petticoat" should ideally be an inch or two higher on the tummy. When t-shirt is replaced by a blouse, a slightly higher petticoat "string/ naada" height would be better.

Coming to your question, what do you mean by hip pleat? The pleat on the "top" of all pleats or the last pleat that transitions saree from pleats to pallu above the left thigh?

You are almost there. You can get suggestions here and improve but the fastest approach will be to get in-person help like suggested in another thread. Find someone in a local Indian store, beauty parlor or just anyone in the Indian community who are willing to demonstrate it in person couple of times.