I just look at you, To move forward in my life Though sometimes I ignore,but you make me to follow you You remind and instruct me to do my things You always make me run around you When I don't find you around me,I will be worried and I make my world more messy I always follow you either in my mobile or my wrist watch All I need to do is follow you because you are-unstoppable I love you time,I thank you for making my things in a perfect way.
Welcome sister after a very long hiatus. A beginning made good with a sweet & short sonnet. Kudos to your brilliant assembly of thoughts in a lucid stanza. A poem probably written from a resort balcony looking at ochre sunrise between a pair of hillocks with verdant patches and tall trees. You are immersed in his thoughts & doings and in his absence it is natural you feel less energised. In texting here your emotions and brooding, you have Walked the reader through the resort. I connected your poem to resort writing as I imagined that to keep away from summer scorching summer you had moved to Manali or Mount Abu or Mahabhaleshvar. Regards. God Bless
Hello Sir Thank you sir ,such wonderful reply. Yeah I will try to be more connected with IL. Regards Ratna