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Unstoppable

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Apr 14, 2024.

  1. RatnaMalliswari

    RatnaMalliswari Gold IL'ite

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    I just look at you, To move forward in my life
    Though sometimes I ignore,but you make me to follow you
    You remind and instruct me to do my things
    You always make me run around you
    When I don't find you around me,I will be worried and I make my world more messy
    I always follow you either in my mobile or my wrist watch
    All I need to do is follow you because you are-unstoppable
    I love you time,I thank you for making my things in a perfect way.
     
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    Welcome sister after a very long hiatus. A beginning made good with a sweet & short sonnet. Kudos to your brilliant assembly of thoughts in a lucid stanza.

    A poem probably written from a resort balcony looking at ochre sunrise between a pair of hillocks with verdant patches and tall trees. You are immersed in his thoughts & doings and in his absence it is natural you feel less energised. In texting here your emotions and brooding, you have
    Walked the reader through the resort.
    I connected your poem to resort writing as I imagined that to keep away from summer scorching summer you had moved to Manali or Mount Abu or Mahabhaleshvar.
    Regards.
    God Bless
     
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    Hello Sir
    Thank you sir ,such wonderful reply.
    Yeah I will try to be more connected with IL.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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