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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Apr 14, 2024.

  1. Apr 14, 2024 #1
    RatnaMalliswari

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    I just look at you, To move forward in my life
    Though sometimes I ignore,but you make me to follow you
    You remind and instruct me to do my things
    You always make me run around you
    When I don't find you around me,I will be worried and I make my world more messy
    I always follow you either in my mobile or my wrist watch
    All I need to do is follow you because you are-unstoppable
    I love you time,I thank you for making my things in a perfect way.
     
    RatnaMalliswari, Apr 14, 2024
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    Welcome sister after a very long hiatus. A beginning made good with a sweet & short sonnet. Kudos to your brilliant assembly of thoughts in a lucid stanza.

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    Walked the reader through the resort.
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    RatnaMalliswari

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    Hello Sir
    Thank you sir ,such wonderful reply.
    Yeah I will try to be more connected with IL.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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