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"Tulips through Lips"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RamyaVaradharajan, Nov 29, 2007.

  1. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    "Tulips in my backyard"
    ( Tulips through Lips )

    What a wonder, what a wonder,
    wondrous tulip blooms and dances,
    across the wafting winds
    of the yonder backyards of my
    pet garden's horticult's bunch.

    What a sight, what a sight,
    these bushy bashing plant replicates,
    among the blinks of the turn-arounds
    of the side pass of my
    pet garden's fertile soil top.

    What a divine aroma for the divine corona,
    with the vibgyor framework and sight abashing,
    await us everyday blossoms,
    with the surpassing moments flashes by
    the wet backyards of our little home.

    What a touch of class and geometrical perfection,
    of the Prime Mover's handwork,
    these tulips flash across
    when they toss away in the sunny morns
    of our pet garden's enthralldom.

    What an odor for the kingfisher and the cuckoo,
    that dash across the mangroves yonder seen,
    amidst the thronging bell shaped flowers lie across
    these specialty tulips govern
    our attention for eternity for one and all!

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
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  2. pammor

    pammor Senior IL'ite

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    A nice title and a nice poem.
     
  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    wonderful words and nice expression coming out of those lips ..sunkan
     
  4. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    ramya

    enge enge
    tamizh nattila...
    unthan veetilaa....
    vibgyor nirama
    ezha athukkum mela
    konjam kanjathanam illaamal
    anuppuvaya
    tulip pookum kizhangugalay...

    sathya
     
  5. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Dear Pammor sir,

    Thank you for peeping in.

    Regards
     
  6. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan ji (my dear most Sundari ma'am)


    Thanks a lot for those little words of expression. You are really an inspiring source.

    Regards
     
  7. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Anbudan vanakkangal dear most Sathya ma'am

    (Thinking for the past two minutes how to reply in poetic flowery Tamil:queen) Thank you for that encouraging reply ma'am.

    En ullam magizha,
    ungal ullam tulip galaaga malara,
    endhan paaraatugal.

    Phew.. :ideaLet me call my mom and show her what i have written in Tamil Sathya ma'am, she will be the happiest :)
    Thank you:hatsoff

    Regards
     
  8. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi ramya

    You have..
    brought me colors
    vibrant and pure,
    touching my heart
    did you say tulips
    though lips..i wonder..
    as i visualise
    your backyard...
    full of life and message
    to life of colour and glory...
     
  9. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

    A very vibrant evening to you as you have wished for :)

    It is my dream backyard, which i treasure as my asset (as of now). I do pray that Almighty gives me strength to nurture the same in real life in my bountiful future.

    Regards
     
  10. Sriniketan

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    tulips are indeed a beauty by itself, when we see them bloom, we know that the spring is in!
    Nicely described garden of yours, wishes to have the same, Ramya!

    sriniketan
     

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