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To you Dear MOM

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rs18, Jun 8, 2007.

  1. rs18

    rs18 Senior IL'ite

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    Dedicated to my Mother whom i lost last October 06'

    When I think about you,
    a million warm memories
    come to me--
    a gentle hand reaching out
    to warm mine,
    kind words to move and lift me,
    so much wisdom and
    happiness to share.
    You're all of this and more,
    always strong,
    ever caring and giving
    of yourself.
    You're one of the greatest
    gifts that I've ever received,
    a constant source of joy
    for all of my tomorrows.
    And I'll love and
    treasure you forever.


    Where are You ?


    Dear Mom "Where are you"
    The blow of wish & the tiny tricks
    that you always share
    have become a boon of wish

    Dear Mom" Where are you"
    Those wonderful evenings
    and those sweet blessings
    are haunting me with full of life

    Dear Mom "Where are You"
    your simple smile, the way you devise
    is anyone there to make things fair?

    Your kindness, your smile
    The gentleness u shower
    Where are you Mom
    Can I have you for “ever”

    Ramya
     
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  2. saviblr

    saviblr New IL'ite

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    Dear Ramya,

    I feel the Pain/Love in Ur words,which makes me understand and follow only one thing in life,Never forget to treasure every moment spent with parents,coz they are there today but tomorrow is something, which Nobody knows.

    Thanks to you for reinforcing the love towards MOM/Parents.

    May Ur Mother's Soul rest in peace.

    Take Care,
    Savi
     
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    Huma Silver IL'ite

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    hi Ramya

    i am sure ur mother is watching after u from heaven. i also miss my father.

    bye
     
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    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Ramya,
    Your poem shows your deep love and longingness for your mother. Mother is the central point around which the wheel of the family spins.
    I pray that God gives you the courage to overcome your sorrow which has flown out as poetry.
     
  5. rs18

    rs18 Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Savi, Huma & malathi.

    Thanks for all thoe kind words keyed in...unfortunatly i lostmy father too 6 yrs back but iam really happy for having you all dear to my heart..

    Thanks for bringing the smile back......
     
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  6. sujathae

    sujathae Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Ramya, That is a wonderful poem. It causes a lot of pain in my heart. I stay far far away from my mother whom i am unable to nurture when she is old. Sometimes, I feel i am selfish. But i am unable to do anything. When they are there we r not able to take care of them. I wonder if the almighty will give me a chance to take care of my parents and in-laws before it is too late. Always pray for it.

    Thanks and regards,

    sujatha
     
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    sudhak90 Senior IL'ite

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    a beautiful tribute to a mother.

    ur poem to me was nostalgic as it's almost 2and half yrs, since i lost my mom.

    nothing, no relation can replace a mother.

    sudha
     
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  8. rs18

    rs18 Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Sujatha & Suda,

    Thanks a lot& ofcourse what you have mentioned is really true that no one can replace a mother......
     

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