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The Unrecognised Love

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Star25, Mar 20, 2018.

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  1. Star25

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    How could I be with you all the time and not understand your love?
    When you cared for me like a mother and stood by my difficulties like a father,
    And showed me life's path like God.

    For your heart was filled with love and compassion,
    And that has been your inherent passion,
    Where in contrast my thoughts were materialistic,
    And my imagination unrealistic.

    When one night when I lay down on my bed I realised your love,
    And repent from then on for having left you,
    My eyes fill with tears thinking of all the sweet memories you had given me,
    And my heart filled with agony for I could not be with you.

    You were the one who taught me what is love,
    You were the one who showed me the real world,
    And the moment when I realised it was you whom I loved the most,
    You weren't there near me.

    I long to see you and to feel your love,
    Years can pass by but my search for your love will never end,
    And someday you will understand my deep rooted love for you.
     
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  2. GeetaKashyap

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    Often we realise the value of things or people only after losing them. Nice poetry.
     
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    Yes very true.. Thank you.
     
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    Well written ma. Don't worry True love never fails. Write more which will reduce your pain
     
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    Sure aunty. Thank you so much. Yes I will definitely. It really does feel good as though some burden is released. That's my first poem too.
     
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    :thumbsup::thumbsup: That's the spirit. Keep going on
     
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    Your first poem is super
     
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    Thank you so much :grimacing::grin:
     
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    RonishBaxter: Thank you so much :grimacing:. I poured my feelings which were buried deep inside me.
     

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