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Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Mar 5, 2008.

  1. srinivasan_vanaja

    srinivasan_vanaja Gold IL'ite

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    hi devika,

    today i happened to read this piece of yours. i thought you would just end the story and ask for FBs.

    but at the end i realized that you framed a story to identify our subconscious mind. i have replied to many threads that would bear the line "follow your conscious". that was a simple reply and doesn't create a impact like yours. wonderful writing.

    as Shanthi said, fear or respect to our conscious is more than fear of God. And thats why He is "Atmanivasi" the in-dweller.
     
  2. M.Chauvinist

    M.Chauvinist New IL'ite

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    The girl in this case (Jaanu?) has been immature and continues to be so. She is yet to know what she wants ( that is why unhappy) and not assertive enough to demand attention form her hubby. She falls in love second time with switching off her analytical mind. She has not seen the photo of the Yahashvi and goes to meet her armed with only a cell phone no, this is not only foolish but also dangerous. In the past she had been more rigid to damage the baby She should have been much conscious to what is the best for her and the baby .
    if she uses some introspect in deciding what she wants she will get it but she need to know that first. She requires to use her brains more than her heart
    Nirav has been very sentimental and did not do the job of the leader of the family by ensuring correct action at correct time. Assuming that the miscarriage spoiled the fertility in total (unlikely to be true) He should have decided on adaption quickly. Sentiments do not produce results action does.
    Yahashvi is either a liar or good for nothing fellow. He allows birth of three children not caring for his wife and then allows the marriage to be broken. The person who does not care for his children's mother can not take care of any other girl.
     
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  3. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Thankyou for your quote M chauvinist.I guess you have a point here, but these are ongoing dilemmas in life and listening to your conscience is what helps you come out of your dilemma.

    Regards,
    Devika


     
  4. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Vanaja,

    Thankyou so much for your quote. I am glad you enjoyed it!

    Regards,
    Devika


     
  5. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Devika
    Beautiful story. I agree with this story as now a days everything has become so hectic and males do not have time and ladies falling into such preys........and guys taking advantage of such ladies, by the time she realises it sometimes it is too late but in ur story it is good she realised what she is doing and came back to her senses.
    It is a real good article for today's ladies.
     
  6. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Aruna,

    Thankyou for writing in. I am glad you liked the story. Yes infedility is becoming a current trend these days and the sooner a person mends his/her ways the better.

    Regards,
    Devika




     
  7. Oviya

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    Dear Devika,

    Your story gave me a great satisfaction of reading a wonderful piece, today. It is worth delaying.

    Actually, I started reading 2 or 3 times. But, caught up with something else. As I could figure it out with the first few lines that it had something heavy, I wanted to read it without any breaks.

    It happened today. A very short story to convey a great meaning. Your ease to handle the different periods of story back and forth is the one which I admired in this writing. I felt watching a movie, directed a by a legend. Congrats!
     
  8. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Wow Oviya,

    You made me feel good. Thanks a lot !!

    Love,
    Devika

     
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    Hi Devika,

    I would like to first say that you have an excellent style of writing. A beautiful story very well written that holds the attention of the reader to the end. Really enjoyed reading it.

    -Deepa
     
  10. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Deepa,

    Thankyou so much for the wonderful words of appreciation. I am really very happy that you enjoyed the story. FB's like this makes me want to write more.

    Love,
    Devika

     

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