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The Roses

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chweetkavi, May 26, 2010.

  1. chweetkavi

    chweetkavi New IL'ite

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    My eyes witnessed an astounding sight
    The freshness of dew, the sweetness of pine
    The sapphire creek, the misty peak
    The smiling roses, the greenish garden

    And you were there, standing beside
    Plucking roses, collecting a pile
    Slowly you turned with a tinge of smile
    In those lips red as cherry

    Those striking eyes emanated a glow
    Towing me in your magnetic gaze
    Then I saw you come near
    My heart thumped, skipping a beat

    I waited there for your one glance
    For a rose with my name
    Specially blossomed and sent through you
    But you passed evading me

    I waited and waited for so long
    The seasons changed, new roses blossomed
    But my garden was still deserted
    Waiting for a rose from you

    Is today the day? I see you approaching
    With the whole basket towards me
    Or as always will you leave?
    Leaving me all alone here

    Slowly you come very close
    now I am sure those roses are for me
    you stop and look and sit besides
    Waiting with the basket in your hand

    With mixed emotion, I say to myself
    Finally the day has arrived
    As I see you with tears
    Placing the roses on my grave
     
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  2. devapriya

    devapriya IL Hall of Fame

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    When I beg for your rose, you are alive!

    When U gave me the garland, i am dead!


    wonderful narration!!!! Keep it up!!!!
     
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  3. Pavithra55

    Pavithra55 Gold IL'ite

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    superb.....:thumbsup heart touching lines
     
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  4. pgraman

    pgraman Gold IL'ite

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    very nice touching poem.
     
  5. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Chweetkavi
    After 2 years you have made an attempt to post in this site and that too with such a lovely poem for us all.
    Hope we will get many more of your writings to read.
     
  6. Yashikushi

    Yashikushi Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    A sweet poem from Chweetkavi.
    Roses are always my fav.
    had mixed feel when read your poem.Totally elapsed when galloped the last lines.
    Thanks for sharing.
     

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