My eyes witnessed an astounding sight The freshness of dew, the sweetness of pine The sapphire creek, the misty peak The smiling roses, the greenish garden And you were there, standing beside Plucking roses, collecting a pile Slowly you turned with a tinge of smile In those lips red as cherry Those striking eyes emanated a glow Towing me in your magnetic gaze Then I saw you come near My heart thumped, skipping a beat I waited there for your one glance For a rose with my name Specially blossomed and sent through you But you passed evading me I waited and waited for so long The seasons changed, new roses blossomed But my garden was still deserted Waiting for a rose from you Is today the day? I see you approaching With the whole basket towards me Or as always will you leave? Leaving me all alone here Slowly you come very close now I am sure those roses are for me you stop and look and sit besides Waiting with the basket in your hand With mixed emotion, I say to myself Finally the day has arrived As I see you with tears Placing the roses on my grave
When I beg for your rose, you are alive! When U gave me the garland, i am dead! wonderful narration!!!! Keep it up!!!!
Hi Chweetkavi After 2 years you have made an attempt to post in this site and that too with such a lovely poem for us all. Hope we will get many more of your writings to read.
A sweet poem from Chweetkavi. Roses are always my fav. had mixed feel when read your poem.Totally elapsed when galloped the last lines. Thanks for sharing.
