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The Rendezvous

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malathijagan, Apr 11, 2007.

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  1. Apr 11, 2007 #1
    Malathijagan

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    Hi everybody!
    Please enjoy my new poem (new to this web site).but it is one of my old poems.
    Happy reading
    Malathi
     

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  2. Apr 11, 2007 #2
    Cheeniya

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    Dear Malathi
    That was a fantastic poem and if a simple solar eclipse can make you weave such a colourful imagery, it is a shame that you have let the poet in you hypernate like a polar bear!
    Give us more, Malathy!
    Sri
     
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  3. Apr 11, 2007 #3
    Kamla

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    That was 'cute'! Yes, a strange word to use here, but that was my first impression. Truth was twinged with humor..
    we do need both indeed
    sun, moon and some good read

    L, Kamla
     
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  4. Apr 11, 2007 #4
    sudhavnarasimhan

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    Dear Malathy,

    That was a good one, enjoyed the fight between the sun and moon.....but isnt it true that we enjoy the moon betterthan the sun?!:mrgreen:
     
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  5. Apr 12, 2007 #5
    chitrajan

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    That was very nice.

    Looking forward to more such poems regularly:mrgreen:
     
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    chitrajan

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    That was very nice.

    Looking forward to more such poems regularly:mrgreen:
     
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  7. Apr 13, 2007 #7
    Malathijagan

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    Hi Cheniya!
    Thank you for your generous praise! But this poem was written by me in 1996. Actually, the newly created web-sites are providing good opportunities to people like me to expose the talents.The real credit should go to such web sites as well as to the people who have interest in poetry as well as the patience to go through these new generation amateur poets.Thank you once again.
    Malathi


     
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    Malathijagan

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    Hello Kamala!
    Thank you for having taken time out to read my poem and give your opinion too.
    Malathi

     
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    Malathijagan

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    Hi Sudha!
    It is true that we enjoy the moon better than the sun!But is it also not true that without the sun's light the moon will not be visible at all! Any way, thank you for having read my poem and taken time to reply too.
    Rgds,
    Malathi
     
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  10. Apr 13, 2007 #10
    Malathijagan

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    Thank you for having taken time off to read my poem and to have reviewed it too.
    Rgds
    Malathi


     
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