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The Rendezvous

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malathijagan, Apr 11, 2007.

  1. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hi everybody!
    Please enjoy my new poem (new to this web site).but it is one of my old poems.
    Happy reading
    Malathi
     

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  2. Cheeniya

    Cheeniya Super Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Malathi
    That was a fantastic poem and if a simple solar eclipse can make you weave such a colourful imagery, it is a shame that you have let the poet in you hypernate like a polar bear!
    Give us more, Malathy!
    Sri
     
  3. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    That was 'cute'! Yes, a strange word to use here, but that was my first impression. Truth was twinged with humor..
    we do need both indeed
    sun, moon and some good read

    L, Kamla
     
  4. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Malathy,

    That was a good one, enjoyed the fight between the sun and moon.....but isnt it true that we enjoy the moon betterthan the sun?!:mrgreen:
     
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    chitrajan Bronze IL'ite

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    That was very nice.

    Looking forward to more such poems regularly:mrgreen:
     
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    chitrajan Bronze IL'ite

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    That was very nice.

    Looking forward to more such poems regularly:mrgreen:
     
  7. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hi Cheniya!
    Thank you for your generous praise! But this poem was written by me in 1996. Actually, the newly created web-sites are providing good opportunities to people like me to expose the talents.The real credit should go to such web sites as well as to the people who have interest in poetry as well as the patience to go through these new generation amateur poets.Thank you once again.
    Malathi


     
  8. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hello Kamala!
    Thank you for having taken time out to read my poem and give your opinion too.
    Malathi

     
  9. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hi Sudha!
    It is true that we enjoy the moon better than the sun!But is it also not true that without the sun's light the moon will not be visible at all! Any way, thank you for having read my poem and taken time to reply too.
    Rgds,
    Malathi
     
  10. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Thank you for having taken time off to read my poem and to have reviewed it too.
    Rgds
    Malathi


     

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