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"the Prime-mover's Creation"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RamyaVaradharajan, Jan 10, 2008.

  1. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    "The Prime-Mover's Creation"

    The moment the color splash sparkle,
    we wonder its a miracle.
    The ribbon unfolds to mark its striking feature,
    making us realize it replicates DNA's nature.
    The tactic merging is the bow's beauty,
    which showcases the enhanced divinity.
    The mantra it chants is personification of perfection,
    which guidelines the bountiful occasion.
    Synchronization of its aura with the limitless blue sky,
    takes its elevated charisma so high.
    The classic pattern exposing its move,
    encourages the soul within to improve.
    The principle character is its present desire,
    to lift the world from its future quagmire !!

    Yes....

    Violet is Rainbow's Validation,
    Indigo is Rainbow's Imagination,
    Blue is Rainbow's Bifocation,
    Green is Rainbow's Goal,
    Yellow is what the Rainbow Yearns,
    Orange is Rainbow's Optimism,
    and Red is Rainbow's Re-appearance !!!

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi ramya,

    Good one again from you. i have a friend who says that nature teaches a lot of things only we don't have the patience to learn from it.

    Your poem reminded me the same....

    and your VIBGYOR is great......I wish you to have a great rainbow in life...all throughout...
     
  3. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

    Thank you very much for having gone through my creation with "patience". Absolutely true. We, human beings, hesitate to realize that we are a product of mother nature and that we are a "part" of nature's biological cycle. Just a thought of this, i could reciprocate to "her" only on these lines !!:queen

    Am happy that you had quoted about a like minded friend of yours here in my thread. My regards to your friend.

    It was actually an on-the-spot state level poetry writing competition in which a VIBGYOR of topics were thrown to us. I was surprised and over whelmed that I bagged the third prize for the same. More than me, my parents were extremely happy for I had accomplished a prize-worthy creation !!

    Thank you for your sincere blessings and prayers ma'am.

    Hope you are fine and recovering now. Always my hearty prayers for your good self and noble Veda sir !!

    Regards and Pongal wishes
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
  4. Shanvy

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    Dear ramya,

    congrats on winning. as a parent i can understand what a moment of pride that should have been to your parents...keep up the good work...

    may god bless you.
     
  5. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Thank you very much my dear Shanthi ma'am !! IL is really my source of inspiration and more than that "the handful of down-to-earth and divine people God made me earn here always move me by their kind gestures" !!:hatsoff:bowdown

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan




     
  6. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow beautiful wordings Ramya
    You Know I love rainbows even today when I see at the rainbow
    Feel like dancing under a rainbow, feel like singing happy
    songs, but my rainbow, no my rainbow, wont shine for me.
    Feel like going to the ocean, building castle in the sand..
    but my rainbow, my rainbow, wont shine for me
    Lord when I look at the Rainbow you have placed in sky so
    blue, it reminds me that all your promises are true
    Your Rainbow reminds me that those who believe on you
    are few, yet you have called us your little Ewe

    Hope to get more from you little rainbow who is full of colours
     
  7. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    "I couldn't ask for a better friend" !!:queenDear most Aruna ma'am,

    Thank you very much for your feedback. It has indeed added colors to this thread. I can understand how childish we all become when we enjoy nature's fragrance through all her bounty-creations.

    But could not interpret your lines ma'am : "building castle in the sand, my rainbow would not shine for me". Any particular reason that can be shared? If its personal am extremely sorry!! Just thought soothing words can heal !!

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
  8. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Ramya
    It is nothing like that you think and please do not feel sorry.
    Feel like going to the ocean, building castle in the sand..
    but my rainbow, my rainbow, wont shine for me

    It is just a dream asking rainbow that when I go to the ocean to build a castle in the sand will you be there, won't you please shine on me......
    This is what it means...
     
  9. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Ah dear Aruna ma'am,

    That was simply amazing !! Sorry, only after that explanation, I could understand!!:cheers

    True, Very true ma'am. We love to welcome the VIBGYOR down to this green planet and always "will" to make a swing out of it to enjoy the life's sway !!

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan

     
  10. Sriniketan

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    Hi Ramya,
    You are adding colors in your parents life. Congrats on winning!
    Wishes for more to come.

    New definition for VIBGYOR----awesome!

    sriniketan
     

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