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The Mistress

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Remanambiar, Jun 26, 2010.

  1. Remanambiar

    Remanambiar New IL'ite

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    His sensitivity where she was concerned knew no bounds and she knew well to play on his feelings .She had this sixth sense to play up on the days any outing was planned . .It would start with a hiccup followed by a cough ,then a wheeze and then the refusal to go anywhere. He would then peer into her insides ,a wipe there ,a pat here and she would be fine .He pored over journals and books to see what was good for her ,what will keep her purring and what will irritate her .And moody …by God she was …!
    Every weekend you’d find him under her (no pun intended ).He would clean out her innards and wash her undersides till she groaned. He would spent hours brushin and polishing her body till she shone Any one who dared touch her had him to content with .All this attention, as a wife that had to come to me was bestowed on her and the green eyed monster in me was straining at the leash to have a go at her .
    But little does she know how fickle he is .She does not know that she is not the first one .She is his fifth .A new babe in the market …that’s all it takes for him to leave her .
    Of late she’s been too cranky .Its her heart ..i believe its not working good as usual …the tubes, the valves or something ..there’s a murmur ….I’ve heard him discussing this with her specialist
    Just days back I ve seen him poring over the pics of a new baby called Manza ….Dear Indica… I think your days are numbered …….
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Rema
    :biglaugh:biglaughYour write up is superb on the new car hahahaha just can't stop laughing at the way you have compared it with a mistress...
    Washing her from undernath and all was sounding so creepy to read till the end you kept your suspense....hehehehe:thumbsup
     
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    Mindian IL Hall of Fame

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    hi rema,
    that was really very cute.:)short and sweet .:thumbsup
    i especially liked the last two paras.:biglaugh
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Dear Rema

    Good suspense. I also in the beginning thought that its his Mistress, then in between thought must be something else. Oh how nicely you have narrated keeping the others in suspense

    love
    viji
     
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    sujathaumakanth Bronze IL'ite

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    Perhaps time to create a new saying like "hell hath no fury than a car scorned????" You are getting really creative at these suspense-loaded snippets, enjoy reading your posts :))

    Cheers,
    Sujatha
     
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    Hello Rema,

    Your style is too good! :biglaughIn the middle, somehow I thought this must be a bike! Another super post!!! :thumbsup
     
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    Remanambiar New IL'ite

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    Thank you Aruna
    Every wife has a competition with her husbands vehicle .:bowdown
    Love
    rema
     
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    Remanambiar New IL'ite

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    Dear Custard
    Thank you so much .Surprise is the element of life .
    Love
    Rema
     
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    Thank you so much Sujatha .You are correct ...'touch my car and youll hear from me 'will be on every man's tongue .His wife may not get so much attention :)

    Love
    Rema
     
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    Dear Viji
    Thank you so much .I' ve always loved Agatha christie .Her novels are like guessing games till the end .My posts are just a humble attempt at suspense .Thank you again
    Love
    Rema
     

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