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The Final Adieu!!

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Jul 19, 2008.

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  1. Jul 21, 2008 #21
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Kamalji,

    I make you cry because crying is good for the eyes.!!Heheheee

    No to be honest this is a story that is there around us , ut we are so caught up in our own lives that we seldom have time to look around and see the sufferings of the people.I ahve often come across such situations when the mother or somebosy close is always in a dilemma as to what would happen to the child ,who is dependend on them for survival ,after them.

    Yes but after all the tears shed here regarding the hard facts of life, I can recommend your blog for the light moments and some laughter.

    Thankyou so much for stepping in Kamalji and glad you liked the story.

    Regards,
    Devika
     
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  2. Jul 21, 2008 #22
    Mindian

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    Dear Devika,


    A VERY TOUCHING STORY INDEED...kanchana made the right decision ..though it was sad...good one girlie......u really rock.... with a new idea always...
    love
    Mindi
     
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  3. Jul 21, 2008 #23
    Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear DM,

    Don't take me otherwise and please don't be sorry also. This was an honest expression that I cried............ because the power is in your Computer Typing that you could bring this out.

    It was very emotional for me, having undergone a similar experience.

    And you being my friend no question of forgiving - only :kiss



     
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  4. Jul 21, 2008 #24
    poonamjoshi9266

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    Dear Devika,

    :cry::cry::cry:

    I am very emotional/sentimental by nature.

    It will take some time for me to become normal now.

    Tume bahut rula diya mujhe, unable to say anything more.
     
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  5. Jul 21, 2008 #25
    brindhak

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    Dear Devika,,,,,

    What can i say....What can I write with a heavy heart....hmmm.... You made me so emotional dear.... I read a story long back ..the story line is the same which you have written now.....I cried a lot after reading that story..you writngs have given the same feel and cry dear....!!

    Great Posting..Keep Coming dear !!
     
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  6. Jul 21, 2008 #26
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    Priya Sakhi,
    Heart breaking story.Emotions beautifully expressed.You have a magic wand in your hand to write emotions and make the readers go through it.
    Ayush - what an irony in the name :-( Sakhi, you are one piped piper of IL, making us all cry /laugh/think your way.Great piece from you.Sad story, but i loved the choice of words you brought out the emotions.

    Keep them coming.
     
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  7. Jul 21, 2008 #27
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Jaishree,

    So glad to see you here!! Thankyou so much for the lovely comments.

    Yes Kanchana was left with no options, thats the fact of life, sometimes some situations force us to do things much against our will.

    Glad you liked the story Jaishree.

    Love,
    Devika
     
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  8. Jul 22, 2008 #28
    Devika Menon

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    Kanaka,

    Thankyou for your comments.

    Devika
     
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  9. Jul 22, 2008 #29
    Kamla

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    Dear Devika,

    There are sad stories and sadder stories. But this one was really dark.
    How hopeless was the situation for this mother...My being went out for her.
    Devika, there is nothing more hurtful and damaging to a mother than see her child who is in full bloom being suddenly struck with such hazards. When health is taken away, there is simply nothing..Nothing...one can do.
    Mother's sincere wish would be to give her own health to the child, if only possible. For anyone, it is easier to undergo pain and hardship, but not to see one of the loved ones, especially the child, suffer. One is helpless, lost.....one is just stuck in a black hole.. a solitary prison.
    Well, I can empathize with the mother here, very well.
    Only, this mother's misery is unimaginable. But then, such tragedies do happen I suppose.
    This was too much for me Devika.....make me laugh now!
    And ofcourse, this too has made it to the FP!!

    L, Kamla
     
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  10. Jul 22, 2008 #30
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    Dear Devika,

    What can i say now ? I don't know what can I write with a heavy heart ? What a apt title you have given ? I cried a lot after reading that story .

    I loved the choice of words you brought out the emotions, really amazed !!

    Great Post, indeed !! Keep posting more !!!
     
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