The Dark Night - A Short Story!!!

Lalitha Shivaguru · Apr 22, 2008

Dear Mals,

A good thriller. In the begining I thought you are writing your experience and thousand butterflies were in my stomach but the end became an anticlimax as I had expected some more action/horror.

Anyway next time when I am alone, i should not remember your piece.........just kidding!

roopadadia · Apr 22, 2008

Goo one Mals, started wondering what it would be....maybe the climax should have been more thrilling.

roopa.

malspie · May 22, 2008

Hi Anubal,

It is natural to feel scared when you are alone with the slightest strange noise. Even the noise of the wind passing through the branches of the trees can make you wonder, what it was.

Thanks for writing in.

malspie · May 22, 2008

Hi Lalitha,

I wanted to end it in a lighter way. You like thrillers like me, there are some soft souls around, who would read this and register it in their mind. I did not want to disturn those souls!!

And it ws the first time, I have attempted a fiction with thrill!!

Thanks for stepping in.