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The Bungalow full of Secrets

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Sivasakthigopi, Mar 17, 2015.

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  1. Apr 14, 2015 #171
    shrivni

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    Very Nice. Nice ending.
     
    shrivni, Apr 14, 2015
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  2. Apr 14, 2015 #172
    Sivasakthigopi

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    Thank you! @shrivni
     
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  3. Apr 14, 2015 #173
    IamLucky

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    Sema Story...felt like seeing a horror movie..
     
    IamLucky, Apr 14, 2015
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  4. Apr 14, 2015 #174
    minjagan

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    Superb story and ending..
    U have a good writing skills.... if u work on ur language skills...u ll bright as a shining star in writing industry..
    good luck...
     
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  5. Apr 14, 2015 #175
    springsnb

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    A perfect horror story...
    well written by you @Sivasakthigopi

    wow
     
    springsnb, Apr 14, 2015
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  6. Apr 14, 2015 #176
    StrangerLady

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    Hi Shivashakthi

    Thanks for such a wonderful horror story.
     
    StrangerLady, Apr 14, 2015
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  7. Apr 14, 2015 #177
    sumalynux

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    Wonderful story and fantastic ending..

    One doubt, Sara names her baby as Rebecca right in
    remembrance of her sister right ?
     
    sumalynux, Apr 14, 2015
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  8. Apr 14, 2015 #178
    curiousgals78

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    good story and great writing skills. loved the story. looking for more
     
    curiousgals78, Apr 14, 2015
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  9. Apr 14, 2015 #179
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    @Sivasakthigopi Sara and Ragu Lovers.Nice twist.superp story.My best wishes to you to become a good writer
     
    periamma, Apr 14, 2015
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  10. Apr 15, 2015 #180
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    The story is really superb :2thumbsup:
    @Sivasakthigopi a very good horror story writer..
     
    ChillySnow, Apr 15, 2015
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