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"Sound mind"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RamyaVaradharajan, Dec 2, 2007.

  1. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear most family members,

    Last night while i was having a discussion with my father about IL finest posts, he encouraged me positively to do my best works without expecting the returns. Though am not regular in my IL posts (owing to examinations and project work in the final year of my college); I spend most of the time in reading the most wonderful posts and try to absorb the expression conveyed by each enthusiastic writer that IL has blessed with!

    Here goes my work for this new and bright month!

    "SOUND MIND"

    The repository of energy source in every creation,
    reflecting the myriad phases of moral cognition,
    unites the gifted soul with the Savior
    channelizing our framework to a grandeur!

    The calm and decent composure,
    arising the act of moral gesture,
    revives our soul to be calm and keen
    creating a value-packed serene!

    The ability to think and act laterally,
    creeping in the oriented thoughts consciously,
    that adds value to the existing position
    making an alternate transformation!

    The worry-free mind adjudged passionately,
    triggering the soul to rest in peace seemingly,
    promotes the inherent character
    alarming the self silent warrior!

    The pristine temple of the sole-star,
    working in tact to shine as the pole-star,
    wakes the soul to unwind
    thus correlating an embodiment of our SOUND MIND!

    Regards
     
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  2. pammor

    pammor Senior IL'ite

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    Yet again u hav put up another nice poem.


    You are now in the Pristine temple of poets
    Working as a sole star with a sound mind
    making the IL Poetry forum to unwind
    as well you shine as a"POLE STAR".

    Good work.Keep it up.
    Pammor.
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Ramya
    That was a nice poem.
     
  4. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Ramya,A very nice poem!
     
  5. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi ramya...

    Good poem....


    Sound mind in a sound body
    they say describes a happy life..
    i wish you have both..
    a person having both wants nothing more..
     
  6. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Pammor sir, have a pleasant and peaceful day!

    Thank you very much for your encouragement. Am just trying to follow the path which is well laid by better people you.

    Just trying to establish myself in this divine site.

    Thank you once again.:hatsoff

    Regards

     
  7. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Aruna ma'am, have a peaceful day.

    Thanks a lot for peeping in.

    Regards
     
  8. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Srini ma'am, a pleasant evening

    Thank you very much
    .

    Regards
     
  9. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

    Thank you very much for your hearty wishes. Better people around me give me strength and their prayers always keep me sound (like that of yours :hatsoff).

    Regards
     

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