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So Who Killed Her ???? Episode 1

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, Apr 19, 2016.

  1. sumalynux

    sumalynux IL Hall of Fame

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    Leena walks into her office...

    Leena's Detective Agency....

    " Raju get the files.... Did you arrange the meeting with Mr Pavan..We need to solve this case very soon"..

    No mam, tried fixing an appointment so many times, his PA mentioned he is busy till next week.. said Raju

    No no... Next week will be too late, i have to close this case soon... In 2 weeks i will be flying to New York for 3 months.. I have signed up as a guest lecturer for MBA criminal justice..Arrange a call with Mr Pavan's PA, i will get an appointment myself....

    Sure mam.. And arranged a call...

    After talking to Pavan PA, leena got herself invited to opening ceremony of "Arya constructions"...

    Raju in 2 days there is opening ceremony of "Arya constructions". I will meet Mr pavan there and get a appointment.. Btw Arya is Pavan son right???

    Yes mam Arya is only son of Pavan and Sneha... I hope you know Sneha.... She is only daughter of big business magnet Sunil varma, who is owner of Sneha group of companies...

    Yes Raju have heard of them.. How long was priya working for them?
    Mam priya was working for 5years.. Even the day of her murder she had been to office, her husband vinod was out of station..Only next day he saw her murdered and complained to the police station...

    Hmmm.. let me read more about her and talk to those suspects,
    There might be some clue.. However smart the criminal is, there will be some or the other clue, helping us to debug the case..

    Btw is case study ready???

    Yes mam case is registered in Lakshmipuram station.
    I met the head constable and discussed the case.
    They have 3 suspects, but they could not find any
    Clue to accuse either of them as Guilty.. I have prepared
    A file based on my study about the case...And handed over file..

    Case Study of "murder of Priya"

    Suspect 1: Priya's husband vinod.

    Suspect 2: Priya's house owner Diwakar

    Suspect 3: Priya's colleague srinivas

    Anyway we have 2 days to meet Mr pavan, by then lets interogate
    This 3 suspects... Bring them tomorrow to our office..

    Am taking this file with me.. call me if anything is there...

    Leena came home by 7pm... Shall i give you coffee akka? Asked maid Ganga..

    No Ganga will directly have dinner is it ready??
    Yes akka, curry is ready.. Will prepare hot chapatis once you are ready said Ganga.. Alright will take bath and come in 20mins..

    Leena took shower, and came down for dinner...

    Ganga served her curry and chapatis..

    Ganga you also finish dinner and go to bed, i dont need milk today.. I have some work.. Dont disturb unless its very important said leena...

    Leena came to her room, lyed down on bed.. And opened the case study and started reading priya's story...


    Ps: Typed in smartphone, please ignore typo... If you like the plot will continue writing....
     
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  2. peddadas

    peddadas Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi Sumalynux,
    Thanks for the story.
    I could imagine.. Suspense story..I love it..
    Please go ahead.. Things are already heated up...in these 2 days does Leena get any clue??
    PS
     
  3. Deepu04

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    Hi Suma, how r u??? Is ur baby in dp??? Very cute dear... Hope all well is with u!!!

    And about the story... Plot is really interesting ... Waiting to read more ... Pls post soon
     
  4. sumalynux

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    Hi Deepu

    I remember, u were one of my old reader...
    Yes dear its me and my son in display pic


    Thanks.. He is very naughty too..

    I dont have laptop now.. My dh has carried it to usa.. I will be joining him soon.. But this plot came to my mind so i started writing in smartphone(which is bit difficult).

    Glad you liked it...
     
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    Hi Suma,

    Happy to see your new story dear. All the best. The plot is very interesting and thriller, suspense are my favourite. Waiting to read more.

    Btw, if possible please finish Ramya's story. I know how tough it is to type in phone, as i too use phone only for browsing and writing.
     
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    Rampuri9 Silver IL'ite

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    welcome back suma. Congrats ..and your son is very cute
     
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    Hi

    Where is my Mr Right story is Almost over.
    May be just an episode to give final ending..... Sure will complete it..

    I have forgotten characters name and where did i stop the story myself:confundio1:...
    Let me read it once then will give final ending.. Its a happy ending with Ramya giving birth to Aishwarya...:thumbup:

    Meanwhile enjoy this story..
     
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    Oh no don't say like that, if you want i will help you by narrating it.

    No issues dear take your own time.
     
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    Hey Suma, wonderful start. Suspense started.... :clap2::clap2:
     
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    Thanks dear...
     

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