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Shikayat karoon kaise???

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Shanvy, Mar 9, 2008.

  1. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Shikayat, na shikwah, yah gila karey rab sey,
    Jo kuch hamein milna that, woh mila,
    Hamey dey diya be panaah khusiyaan,
    Kabhie hum soche kya hum khaabil jitney

    Unko yeh shikayat hai, ki hum kuch na kehtey,
    Kya kahoon, hum aadat sey majboor, gila karna nahi atah,
    Mila hain mera yaar mere pyaar bankey,
    khi hum kya karey khuda,shukriyaa yah shikayat,

    Mere ankhon key taare, kiley aangan mey phool bankey
    jab bulaye mujhe maa, kush ho jaatey hain hum,
    jaise duniya mein mila hain sirf hamey yeh khusiyaan,
    mujhe mili hai ek vardaan, sar juka key karey shukriya,

    Zindagi, sirf bahaar hi nahin, pathjad bhi saath hain,
    Hamey diya hain itna taqat, hum ladd jayey haalat sey,
    Itney vishwas rakthey hain,hum biccha lenge phool ,
    Merey apnon khey raasteh mein, milee hai himmat,
    zindagi khulke jeene khi,apne usoolon pey,
    Karey bhi kya gilah, ya shikayat ya shikwah,
    Jab hamein patah hain apkey saaya hain saat mein....
    Hamey sirf karna hain shukriya, yaa khuda,
    Mere duniya key rakhwaley....
     
  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Wah Wah!!!!!!!
    Shanthi ek hi ball mein double sixer????????????
    Kya baat hai yaar
    Beautiful wordings liked the 2nd para the best yaar
     
  3. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

    You stole my heart with these lines !!!! ( :bowdown:bowdown:bowdown:bowdown:bowdown:bowdown:bowdown ) to the power ""N""

    Regards with Lots of love and prayers
    RamyaVaradharajan


     
  4. Oviya

    Oviya Silver IL'ite

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    Wah..Wah...WahBowBowBow

    Acha kahan aapne!

    Pyar se,
    Oviya.
     
  5. Saraswathipv

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    Wah Shanthi Wah.....

    Aapka jawab nahinBowBow

    I love the line


    Itney vishwas rakthey hain,hum biccha lenge phool ,
    Merey apnon khey raasteh mein, milee hai himmat,
    zindagi khulke jeene khi,apne usoolon pey......
     
  6. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Shanthi
    Kya bath hai
    aap idne achi kavitha likthihum
    mujhe bahud pasandh hai
    There are no words to describe the beauty of your words your thoughts..except tos ay they reflect one of the most beautiful woman inside and out Bow
     
  7. Shanvy

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    Aruna yaar

    Shukriya aur kya kahoon...
    kabhie kayaal key rangat utar jaati hai lafzoh mein
    aur nikhar jaatey hain aap jaise doston khi wah wah seyBow.
     
  8. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Ramya Dear,

    Thank you thank you to the power of "N".

    More than writing, the sharing has really given a beauty to these lines i suppose...
     
  9. Shanvy

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    Oviya dear,

    Aap jaise prothsahan dene waley ho...
    hamey aur kya chahiye...
    is keliye hum pyar sey kahe shukriya..
     
  10. Shanvy

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    Saras dear,

    shukriya shukriya,

    I loved writing them...
     

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