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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Devika Menon, Mar 12, 2008.

  1. varalotti

    varalotti IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Devika,
    That was a very lovely piece of writing.
    The following lines brought out the real suffering of a woman who has been mercilessly betrayed

    Very expressive powerful lines, I am sure, will haunt me for the rest of my life.

    Way to go, Devika.
    sridhar
     
  2. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Varalotti Sir,

    Like its said 'Save the best for the last',your visit to this post is probably the explanation to that.!!
    You came, You saw and I am blessed!!

    Love,

    Devika

     
  3. sundarusha

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    Devika,
    Beautiful poem. keep writing..
     
  4. Devika Menon

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    Thanks Usha,
    Glad you liked it!

    Devika

    quote=sundarusha;267556]Devika,
    Beautiful poem. keep writing..[/quote]
     
  5. RashmiA

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    lovely... keep writing - u touch the heart!
    :)
    rashmi
     
  6. Devika Menon

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    Hey Rashmi , thanks for writing in dear. Glad you liked the post!

    Love,
    Devika
     
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    Dear Devika,

    Hello this is disha here , this would be a new name for you as i would like to tell you that one of my frand told me about this site & i find this place fantastic and full of livelyness.

    As i m very fond of poems and shayris i was searching for the same i came across your poem .

    I would only:bowdown.:wow

    The words you have placed , filled with the emotions and true feelings in your poem i dont have any words to say.

    Would just say mind blowing , and i m fan of yours now onwards, so you will have one more fan in your list of fans.

    As am sure after reading this beautiful poem you must be having the list of fans.

    I m very very now deeply keen to read all your poems.

    Regards
    Disha:)
     
  8. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Disha,

    Thanks for bringing up an old poem of mine. Glad you liked it!!

    Your words are highly motivating.:):)

    Looking forward to your shayaris!:thumbsup:thumbsup

    Love,
    Devika
     
  9. Nithu

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    Hi Friend,
    Ur Poem filled with strong emotions...
    Touching everyone's heart...
    Nicely portrayed...
    :thankyou2:
     
  10. Devika Menon

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    Thanks Nithu,

    Glad you liked it. Thrilled to know it touched your heart. A comment like that means a lot to me :)

    Love,
    Devika
     

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