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Sakalakalavalli

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamildownunder, Feb 20, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Thinam oru kavithai

    Dear ladies,

    Due to popular demand, I have changed the title of this thread as 'Thinam oru kavithai'. Yes, in keeping with the title I shall post a poem a day. Please give your comments which will work as tonic for me.

    சகலகலாவல்லி

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    நளினமான உனது நடையைப் பார்த்தால்
    நீ ஒரு பரத நாட்டிய கலையரசி

    குயிலினும் இனிமையான உனது குரலைக் கேட்டால்
    நீ ஒரு சிறந்த பாடகி

    என் இதயத்தை சிக்க வைக்கும் கோலம் போடும்
    நீ ஒரு சிறந்த வரைபட கலையரசி

    கண்களால் கவிதை பாடும்
    நீ ஒரு கவிதாயினி

    என்னைக் கண்டும் காணாதது போல் இருக்கும்
    நீ ஒரு தேர்ந்த நடிகை

    மொத்தத்தில் நீ ஒரு சகலகலாவல்லி

    Nalinamana unathu nadaiyai paarthal
    Nee oru bharathanatya kalai arasi

    Kulinum iniya unathu kuralai kettal
    Nee oru sirantha paadaki

    En idayathai sikka vaikum kolam podum
    Nee oru varai pada kalaiarasi

    Kangala kavithai paadum
    Nee oru kavithayini

    Ennai kandum kaanathathu pol irukkum
    Nee oru therntha nadikai

    Mothathil nee oru sakalavalli
     
    Last edited: Feb 28, 2007
  2. Manjureddy

    Manjureddy Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Tamil !
    What happened ? Sleepy ? Get up and have some coffee.
    You can do better than this.

    Manjula
     
  3. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi, manju,

    I am getting nervous because it seems you have high expectations of me. I write poems just for fun. I am a kathukutti, L-borad, thengai moodi bhahavathar etc. I will try to improve. Here is a poem written for you.

    வசன நடையில் எழுதி
    வார்த்தை ஜாலங்கள் செய்து
    கவிஞன் என்று இறுமாந்திருந்தேன்
    உன் கண்களின் கவிதைகளைப் படிக்கும் வரை

    Vasana nadaiyil ezhuthi
    vaarthai jaalangal seythu
    kavignan enru irumaanthirunthen
    un kankalin kavithaikalai padikum varai
     
  4. Manjureddy

    Manjureddy Gold IL'ite

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    Wow Tamil !
    You are back in form again !

    Dont be nervous, dear Thengamoodi. I am not Subbudu !
    Just keep dishing them out and dont worry about my reviews. For all you know, I could be a cock-eyed, nut case who cannot tell cheese from chalk !

    :wave
    Manjula
     
  5. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Thanks ,Manjula. With your inspiration, 'Oru thengaimoodi arangerukirathu'. Here is one dedicated to you.

    மீன்களுக்கு தூண்டில் போடும் எனக்கு
    தூண்டில் போடுகின்றன
    மீன்களைப் போன்ற உனது கண்கள்

    Meenkaluku thoondil podum enakku
    thoondil podukinrana
    mmeenkalai ponra unathu kankal
     
  6. Manjureddy

    Manjureddy Gold IL'ite

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    Yerkanave arangerivitta thengaimoodi, iniya mridangam aagi vittadhu !

    A poem dedicated to me ! Wow ! I feel like Kushboo ,getting a temple built for her !

    :thankyou2:
    Manjula
     
  7. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Wow , those were a good set of poems, Tamildownunder, i liked the sakalakalavalli one....keep it up and .....
    Manju are you really encouraging or criticising, anyway you seem to have a couple of poems dedicated to you too.....so i guess it makes Tamildownunder to improve and dish one poem everyday....
    so both of you keep it up...i am enjoying this!:wink:
     
  8. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Wow, one more rasikai intha thengaimoodiku. I like your idea of one poem everyday. I can scribble, but who is to read? Here is one for today.

    எண்ணங்கள் கோடி கவிதை படைக்க
    எழுத்துக்கள் தேடி இதயம் துடிக்க
    கவிதையாய் வந்தாய் என் துயர் துடைக்க

    Ennangal kodi kavithai padaika
    ezhuthukal thedi ithayam thudika
    kavithaiyai vanthai en thuyar thudaika
     
  9. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Keeping up the 'One poem every day', here is my poem for today.

    தினப் பத்திரிகை எடுக்க வரும் போதெல்லாம்
    அழகான கோலங்கள் இடும் நீ
    உன் கோலத்தின் வளைவுகளில்
    என் இதயம் சிக்கி விட்டதை அறிவாயா?


    Thinap pathirikai edukka varum pothellam
    azhakana kolangal idum nee
    un kolathin valaivukalil
    en ithayam sikki vittathai arivaya?
     
  10. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Wow,Tamil,

    You really seem to have it in you to write so well.....you have one more fan , my hubby...i showed him also, he could appreciate the simplicity in your 4 line poetry......
    keep them coming!:2thumbsup:
     

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