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rishton ka tana bana ... soch soch kar pareshan hu aey zindagi

Discussion in 'Regional Poetry' started by sunsim3, Dec 9, 2015.

  1. sunsim3

    sunsim3 Senior IL'ite

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    Hi all,
    soch soch kar pareshun hu aey zindagi ...kya soch kar khuda nay yeah duniya banaye... kya soch kar khuda nay humay rishto mai bandha... kya soch kar khuda nay yeah sara ana bana buna ....

    janam say hi ek door mai bandh diya humay ma-baap ki door , samay kata fir kuch aur dhagay juday dosto nay dastak di ...

    masoom thay ab tak toh hasi mazak mai hi samay gujar raha tha kuch zyada samajh patay aey zindagi tujhe us say pehle hi ek aur rishta juda ... suna hai saat janmo ka hai yeah nata .. socha yahi hai zindagi ka asli mayana ek lambay safar k liye humsafar mil gaya ...

    itna assan nai tha humsafar k sath judna aur bachpan kay un rishton ko chod kar aagay badhnaa ...

    soch soch kar pareshan hu aey zindagi... janam kay rishtay ko kyu chodkar aagay bhadna pad gaya is saat janam kay rishtay ko nibhanay k liye.

    ab nah toh puri tarah yaha ji patay hai na hi us jahan mai laut patay hain ...

    soch soch kar pareshan hu aey zindagi ...kyu banaye yeah rishtay khuda nay... kyu nai humay bhi panchiyo ki tarah ajad rakha ...

    kyu rishton ki duriyo say farak padta hai mujhe ..
    kyu naaton ki kadwahat zeher gholte hai mujhe mai ....
    kyu doston ko kami takleef dayte hai mujhe ....

    kaaaash mai kisi say judi hi na hoti
    kaaash mujhe kisi say koi moh hi na hota ... kisi say koi apnapan , koi apeksha hi nai hoti ....

    soch soch kar pareshan hu aey zindagi ...

    takleef rishton kay honay say nai hoti ....
    takleef toh hoti hai jab unhi rishto mai pyaar, hasi, muskurahat, shararat, apnapan , woh humdardi, woh khyal rakhna in sub cheezon ki jagah nai hoti...

    paisa - shauhrat itne baday kyu ho jatay hai ki khushiyon kay aagay ....
    aham kyu sar par sawar ho jata hai ....

    soch soch kaar pareshaan hu aey zindagi ...
    pyaar hi kyu nai mayena hai tujhe jeena ka

    jeenay k liye toh aj bhi wohi chahiye roti, kaapda aur makan ...
    fir kyu mehelo ki chahton mai gharo ko tod daytien hai hum ...
    kyu aham mai ek durse say naatien tod dayte hai hum ....

    soch soch kar pareshan hu aey zindagi ...

    Some feelings just tried to put them down.. I feel good :2thumbsup:after I write.. posting for first time.

    Do leave a word or two for me to feel a bit more positive and I wonder how many of you can relate to this post ?
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Sunsim

    This is life, we make new relations not that we need to forget the old ones, along with the old carry forward the new and I am sure you will start liking your new life.

    Have you just shifted to US???

    Looks like your loneliness has made you write this poem.
    Wordings are fantastic, you have put out your heart here.....
     
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    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice to read. Very expressive. do write more
     
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  4. sunsim3

    sunsim3 Senior IL'ite

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    Thanks for moving it to write category. Was actually searching but didn't knew where to post.

    No, I am not new to usa its couple of years now.

    But at times even happy life gives you so many experiences that you think.
    I am in kind of same boat.

    Thanks
     
  5. sunsim3

    sunsim3 Senior IL'ite

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    Sure... Will try to write more I use to write when I was in my college days. I might have kept them somewhere in my diaries back in india.
    Thank you
     
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