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Precious!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Apr 22, 2019.

  1. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Did someone tell you before that
    You have your mom's eyes dear?
    So meek, eager to please too yet
    You get what you wanted here.

    I don't remember my childhood days,
    When your mom took care of me then.
    I was with her for many of those days
    As she fought her illness and nearly won.

    I moved away in grief and spent
    Several months elsewhere for good.
    I came back later; but you went
    Elsewhere for job. It felt so good.

    Occasionally we saw each other.
    Every time I was reminded of
    Whom I lost, and felt that wither.
    But you gave moments to cheer and laugh.

    You chose what you wanted to study.
    You picked the job, you liked and went.
    Now you have chosen whom to marry.
    Am confused, worried, but not hurt.

    We didn't spend much time together, kid!
    That doesn't mean that I don't love you.
    I understand that you're grown up a bit.
    And accept your choice. I know its due.

    Hope and wish the very best to
    You and the one whom you chose.
    Always remember this! Will you?
    We all are one! We are still close!

    Don't feel bad and cheer up now!
    You are about to start something
    That'll bring all good things and love.
    That perhaps is the most precious thing!
     
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  2. Adharv

    Adharv Gold IL'ite

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    :worship2: You have penned it very realistically sir :clap2::clap2:
     
  3. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks a lot @Adharv, for your like and feedback to this post. This is more on a personal front and I am happy to see 3 likes to this post. -rgs
     
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    Partially, I could connect this with my dear one, sir :)
     
  5. rgsrinivasan

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    Is it? That is mere coincidence Madam! Thanks again. -rgs
     

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