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Poem To A Mom By A 12 Yr Old

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sunkan, Mar 10, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    Was going through my treasures and found this gem thought of sharing it with you all

    POEM 4 U
    Love is the smile on your face
    which lights up my world like the Sun

    Love is the way you act angry with me
    Like a sound of thunder on a stormy night

    Love is the way you protect me
    From the times I wish I could run away from all my fears

    Love is the way you teach me stuff
    when you know I'm struggling and you just want to help

    But most importantly
    Love is what you make it
    as the miniature raindrops of happiness
    falling from your eyes this very moment
    when little gestures of mine make you cry

    Happy Birthday Mum
     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    sunkan,

    It is a real gem. lucky mother..

    Thanks for sharing.
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Sunkan
    This is really a precious gem in your treasure box.
     
  4. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Very good one, Sunkan.
    Have a Treasure Hunt and keep posting such nice ones....

    sriniketan
     
  5. meera2503

    meera2503 Senior IL'ite

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    Wow, I wish my daughter would write me a poem like this one.. beautiful.
     
  6. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    start by getting her to read things like these and sure she will learn to put her feelings into words and the rest is bliss..sunkan
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  7. PushpavalliSrinivasan

    PushpavalliSrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sundari,
    A nice one. Thank you for sharing. I am lucky to have a daughter who sent a poem on my birthday and it was also posted in IL
    Love,
    PS
     
  8. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    dear pushpa i seem to have missed that pl post the link here..i would love to read that..in fact i have my own pangs with her that she does not do too many of the nice poems and article..sundari
     
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    A 12 yr old writing this wonderful piece is an absolute delight.I cherished all the lines..Full of innocence.....Wish the child good luck!
     
  10. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    sure aishu, the minute i catch her mom....Witsend
    sunkan
     

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