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Please Leave me ALONE

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rajkumarankar, May 15, 2010.

  1. rajkumarankar

    rajkumarankar Senior IL'ite

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    I sit and stare at the mirror
    Gathering all the memories of my life
    Then I see few tears from my eyes
    And I feel my broken heart bleeding for you

    Your smile started hurting me every time

    Your every lie to me , now I realize
    I thought to die for you
    Because I love you more than my life
    But how can you do this to me
    How can you love some one ?
    And how can you marry some one else ?

    Now you are happy seems nothing happened

    But I cannot bare this pain anymore
    And I cannot keep a fake smile on my face anymore
    So , I sit and stare at the mirror
    Asking the questions again
    ''How can you leave me alone?
    And how can you hurt me again and again?''

    Raaj
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Are you a person who is very badly hurt in his personal love affair. Almost all your poems are on unsuccessful love.
     
  3. swaathiha

    swaathiha Platinum IL'ite

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    awesome...... me too the same
     
  4. Pallavi4me

    Pallavi4me Platinum IL'ite

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    Though the feel of the poem is understandable and one can feel the pain you have............ But I would say that You have to come out of that phase and should start appreciate people around you who cares for you..

    Wish you good luck.
     

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