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Pebbles And Bubbles

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by GeetaKashyap, Feb 2, 2019.

  1. GeetaKashyap

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    I am a battered, sedimented

    And hardened pebble,

    In awe of the free-spirited bubble.

    Yet, I feel strangely comfortable

    In my own being and marvel

    At my own spirited survival.

    I, an old-world woman,

    Who accepted and

    Won all the challenges

    The destiny threw at me

    represent the stoic resilience.

    Though at times, I do loathe

    Her impatience and vacillation,

    To me, the modern woman


    Represents the exuberant

    Confidence and flexibility.



    Often my mind debates

    Who is better amongst us?



    Unbiased, I vote for the bubble.

    She is my own new version;

    Despite her fragility


    She has the courage

    To be on par with the men

    And stay unfazed

    By the hardships

    Strewn on her path,

    She bounces back

    Again and again,

    Like a brave warrior

    Reflecting gaily

    The myriad colours of

    The beautiful rainbow.

    She leads the world forward;

    She's truly God’s best creation.


    *************************

    I dedicate this poetry to dear @periamma.
    The image has been taken from the internet for representation only.
     
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  2. Adharv

    Adharv Gold IL'ite

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    :worship2: Gurugale simply superb :clap2::clap2: very nice expressed.

    Thank you.
     
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  3. GeetaKashyap

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    Thank you, dear.
     
  4. messedup

    messedup Platinum IL'ite

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    Not easy for all. Finding faults is much easy. But still positive examples are always there.
     
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    Hi Geeta,
    superb and always like your writings. Obviously my vote goes to BUBBLE the warrior.
     
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    @GeetaKashyap Wow Awesome Presentation .Framing of words simply superp.
    This Pebble rolls on in IL for the third time. Geeta Thanks ma
     
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    I didn't get the context, could you please clarify?
     
  8. GeetaKashyap

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    Thanks, Mistt.:beer-toast1:
     
  9. GeetaKashyap

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    Thanks, dear periamma, for the inspiration and appreciation.
     
  10. satchitananda

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    Both the bubble and pebble are winners in their own unique ways.
     
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