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Once Upon A Time!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mistt, Jun 25, 2022.

  1. Mistt

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    I lived in a world as beautiful as a garden.
    I was safe in that world just like in a mother's womb.
    I was innocent just like a lamb.
    I shone just like a sunbeam.
    I was happy just like a butterfly dances on flowers.
    My mind was pure just like a baby's Smile.
    I was carefree just like a bird.
    I was excited for every simple thing just like a bud about to bloom.
    I played just like a baby deer.
    Everyone looked sweet just like sugar.
    I adored every thing whatever came on my way.
    I enjoyed stress free schooling just like a bunny.
    I wish I would get back my pleasant childhood ......
     
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    Cheeniya Super Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    I am in my second childhood. Believe me, it is as sweet as the one you have so eloquently recalled:blush::blush:
     
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    So sweet... brought a smile on my face as memories of my childhood flow

    @Cheeniya sir, Thanks for the encouragement -- your attitude is everything!
    Racing towards second childhood now:treadmill:
     
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    Thyagarajan Finest Post Winner

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    I imagined a little rabbit in a small exquisite garden filled with blooming flowers and buds over which Monarchs like helicopter stays and shifts sucking honey with their wings filled with pollen while a young deer watching it. This scene is stress busting.

    The poem is a fine fantasy land an amusement park.

    A vicarious enjoyment.
    Any poetry is a good mood booster. If a person is up for a romantic and emotional rollercoaster ride, poetry is good literary choice to him or her through that experience. If someone wants to calm down and relax, poems can do Stress-busting.

    After sixty, one is said to have begun a second child-hood.

    Thanks and Regards.
     
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    Thank you, uncle for your like and comments. :clap2:You have been enjoying all the phases of life with your matured attitude. I'm trying to be my best in accepting reality and I hope it will be there forever.
     
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    Thank you , SunPa for liking the poem and your lovely comment.:grinning:
     
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    Thank you, Sir for your nice comments .
    So true!
     
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