1. Have an Interesting Snippet to Share : Click Here
    Dismiss Notice

New Saint

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamildownunder, Feb 14, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    921
    Likes Received:
    28
    Trophy Points:
    48
    Gender:
    Male
    Our love did not grow
    so my beard grew

    closing my eyes I thought of you
    you came as Goddess lakshmi
    and threw coins at me

    opening the eyes I find
    standing in the bus stand
    and public throwing coins at me

    In me they see a new saint!
     
    Loading...

  2. Manjureddy

    Manjureddy Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    601
    Likes Received:
    569
    Trophy Points:
    188
    Gender:
    Female
    :rotfl

    Dear Tamil DU

    You do have a wonderful imagination ! Do you write Haiku in tamil ?
    Keep them flowing, Tamil ! You have earned yoursef a faithful fan !

    Manjula
     
  3. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

    Messages:
    1,459
    Likes Received:
    68
    Trophy Points:
    103
    Gender:
    Female
    hello

    mulachu moonu ila vidala enbaargal
    my god nethu vandavanellam
    engalai vaarthayal puratti edukka
    vizhithu nirkirom inge?

    sathya
     
  4. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    921
    Likes Received:
    28
    Trophy Points:
    48
    Gender:
    Male
    Thanks, Manjula for your appreciation. I do not write poems conforming to any style. My writtings or should I say kirukals are spontaneous and from the heart. I have read your poems and they are excellent.
     
  5. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

    Messages:
    921
    Likes Received:
    28
    Trophy Points:
    48
    Gender:
    Male
    Ha ha ha. Mulaichu moonu ilai vidalaiya, naan innum mulaikave illaima.

    Thanks for your praise.
     

Share This Page