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New Dawn ( a poem on occasion of New Year)

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by suby, Jan 1, 2013.

  1. suby

    suby Silver IL'ite

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    NEW DAWN

    Gone is now the nebulous night.
    as in the east, a new dawn breaks
    with warmth touching forests deep,
    snowy peaks and tranquil lakes.

    Silver linings, the night too had
    with stars and moon dotting the sky.
    It was witness to simmering passions
    as the moon made tides rise high and high .

    The chivalrous breeze had crush with trees
    with fresh romantic launches.
    On the land he drew moving patterns
    with silhouettes of swaying branches.

    Hues and shades played at dusk
    like a giant kaleidoscope on the sky.
    Cherish the coos and cries of chirpy birds
    as they returned in flocks from the sky.

    Forget the dark moments passed.
    But forget not the great deeds of past.
    Open the windows to the rays of dawn,
    let the Sun light in and forever last.

    -suby
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    A fantastic start Suby. Enjoyed reading. These lines are too good.
    The chivalrous breeze had crush with trees
    with fresh romantic launches.

    On the land he drew moving patterns
    with silhouettes of swaying branches.


    Thanks for sharing. Happy new year! -rgs
     
  3. suby

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    Thank you Sir for the encouraging comments.
    -suby
     

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