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Never Karna Pyar

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Reenae, Nov 8, 2007.

  1. Reenae

    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    I have seen the world from near and far
    found someone, she came in my life like BAHAR

    I thought I found my future, fell in PYAAR
    something happened to me,
    I called that BUKHAR,

    I never realized, is it DIN or RAAT,
    all the time LOVE was getting SAWAAR
    used to think of her BAAR BAAR

    In these kind of affairs
    always remain HOSHIYAAR
    I used to think
    I will have BERA PAAR..

    but that girl made me too much KHUWAR
    what did i get in return merey YAAAR
    i will reccommend pyaar
    NEVER KARNA PYAAR
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    That's a negetative poem Reena
    It is sad to know that you were such a good friend to her and loved her so much.
    All that I can say is that person was not worth of your friendship.
    Leekin pyar karna maat chodho yaar.
     
  3. Pallavi4me

    Pallavi4me Platinum IL'ite

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    Here, I agree with Arunarc...

    But appreciate you for your rhythmic sense...
     
  4. pranatim

    pranatim Platinum IL'ite

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    Look at the humor side of the poem and I can say karo pyar baar baar lagatar aur ish kosish ko chod na matt yaar.
     

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