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My Wish for you Dearest Daughter

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Sheebavinod, Dec 13, 2009.

  1. Sheebavinod

    Sheebavinod Gold IL'ite

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    When I saw my daughter walking by herself in the park refusing to be supported by her father, a myriad of feelings and emotions dawned upon me. I was happy and little sad at the same time. Happy to see her grow, achieve her milestones on time then why sad, I thought. Then as I pondered over it ,realized that she was growing into an independent individual who would not need my support 24x7 anymore , to hold on to her, to help her stand, or to walk, would she run behind me calling ‘amma,amma’ to get attention as she does now, slowly she will start eating on her own and what not, the list is endless. Was I feeling jealous, or where they anxiety pangs or some hormonal clash with in me, still have to figure out. Motherhood has made me quite emotional and I guess heart rules over head when it comes to her. That’s when I wrote the below poem and this is for you, my precious princess.

    As I see you grow,
    With every step, every day
    I wonder how
    The time seems to fly, have no words to say.

    Today in the park, I saw you walk
    With small baby steps, all by yourself
    Your dad smiling at your baby talk
    And I stood alone, gazing at you, all by myself.

    My thoughts running wild
    Its all about you, my darling child
    You need no hand to hold on to now
    Was wondering, wasn’t it too quick somehow?

    My little bird all set to fly,
    Into the world of deep blue sky
    I wish her all the good in life
    With high and lows, she should learn
    And a name for herself, she should earn
    I wish she treats her life right
    And make future for herself bright

    My baby as I see you grow
    My eyes fill up with tears
    You make me PROUD everyday
    And I rest all my fears.
     
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  2. varalotti

    varalotti IL Hall of Fame

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    Having fathered a daughter I can appreciate your feelings. When you see your angel growing up you are happy and proud on the one hand. And also there is a tinge of sadness on the other. At every stage you remind yourself that she is one stage closer to leaving the nest.

    Well I have been through all that,Sheeba.

    The poem is simple and sweet. I loved it.
    Keep up the good work.
    love,
    sridhar
     
  3. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Sheeba,

    Wonderful way of expressing the mother's pride and feelings.
    God bless your kiddo.
    so take a print out and file in your daughter's scrapbook. she will definitely appreciate it.
     
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    PushpavalliSrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sheeba
    Your write up and poem to your princess made me travel through my memory lane four decades back.
    Now my daughter writes poems and posting them here.
    A nice write up,
    Love,
    PS
     
  5. knot2share

    knot2share Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Sheebs
    The poet among our bunch!! Very beautifully written. I am sure it strikes a cord with many, just like how Sridharji, Shanthi and PSmami have said. Yes you need to really rest your fears and enjoy the time.
     
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    amihere Platinum IL'ite

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    Sheeba dear, its wonderful dear. Your DD will be so happy to read all these poems you have written for her once she grows up:)
     
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    as usual a treat Sheebs dear!
     
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    Sheebavinod Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Sridhar,

    Thanks a lot for the feedback and very glad that you liked the poem.
     
  9. Sheebavinod

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    Dear Shanvy,

    Thanks a lot for the blessings dear:). And my hubby suggested the same idea like you did and will be doing it for sure.Happy to know that you liked my write up.
     
  10. Sheebavinod

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    Dear PS mami,

    It makes my heart swells with pride that my little poem could take you back to the memory lane. I am sure you would have enjoyed and loved every minute of it.

    Thank you so much for the feedback.
     

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