This is my original poem. Since the day we first met you make me look for you again and again like a chain reaction so, you have nuclear energy Without uttering a sound your eyes speak thousand words so, you have ultrasound energy The sparkle in your eyes reach me even when I am far so, you have laser energy When you smile at me you make me fall at your feet so, you have gravitational force when you just see me you make my heart beats to race so, you have magnetic force when you leave me you leave behind in me great vacuum like in space Oh, Indian woman! you are a scientific marvel without you I am just gravel
Re: My Valentine Day poem hello wow !! such a lot of energy and force.... if we could just gather all this energy and force we could light up a few places send a few rockets.. run a few trains pump sweet water all round cook a nice dinner with love all the way or atleast keep hearts warm....... no science this ..!! sathya
Hi, That was a great scientific poem ....wow , so much energy and force.....i did not realise that!:mrgreen: Enjoyed it Tamildownunder!:2thumbsup: Sathya, Your rejoinder on that was also too good! You really have a way with words, writing them in verses....wow....keep it up, gal!
TamilDownunder, That was good,mate! Happy Valentines Day! Love has the potential to make you a better person, so it as potential energy as well!
Dear Tamildownunder That sure was one youthful , energetic cascade of love! Best wishes VS ---------------------- Dear Sathya Your poems are the aromatic garnishing enlivening any thread. Loved that line: "or at least keep hearts warm". :waveBest Wishes VS
Dear Tamildownunder Poetic marvel with full of energies and forces. Keep it up. Do post some more. Regards Varudhini
Dear Tamildownunder Poetic marvel with full of energies and forces. Keep it up. Do post some more. Regards Varudhini
Dear Tamildownunder... You sure are an odist, a modern one at that, nice lines. Yes, Indian women are all that and more, they are electrifying...one cannot step on the line Satya, your verse was very good too, keep them coming. L, Kamla
Thank you all for your appreciation. Indian woman has inspired me to write this poem for Valentine's Day. Have a wonderful Valentine's Day. Satya, your lines are excellent.