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My Valentine Day poem-Scientific Marvel

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamildownunder, Feb 13, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    This is my original poem.

    Since the day we first met

    you make me look for you
    again and again like a chain reaction
    so, you have nuclear energy

    Without uttering a sound
    your eyes speak thousand words
    so, you have ultrasound energy

    The sparkle in your eyes
    reach me even when I am far
    so, you have laser energy

    When you smile at me
    you make me fall at your feet
    so, you have gravitational force

    when you just see me
    you make my heart beats to race
    so, you have magnetic force

    when you leave me
    you leave behind in me
    great vacuum like in space

    Oh, Indian woman!
    you are a scientific marvel
    without you I am just gravel
     
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  2. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    Re: My Valentine Day poem

    hello


    wow !! such a lot of energy and force....

    if we could just gather
    all this energy and force
    we could light up a few places
    send a few rockets..
    run a few trains
    pump sweet water all round
    cook a nice dinner
    with love all the way

    or atleast keep hearts warm.......

    no science this ..!!

    sathya
     
  3. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Hi,

    That was a great scientific poem ....wow , so much energy and force.....i did not realise that!:mrgreen:
    Enjoyed it Tamildownunder!:2thumbsup:


    Sathya,
    Your rejoinder on that was also too good! You really have a way with words, writing them in verses....wow....keep it up, gal!:wink:
     
  4. Vidya24

    Vidya24 Gold IL'ite

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    TamilDownunder,

    That was good,mate! Happy Valentines Day! Love has the potential to make you a better person, so it as potential energy as well!
     
  5. vidyasarada

    vidyasarada Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Tamildownunder

    That sure was one youthful , energetic cascade of love!

    Best wishes
    VS

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    Dear Sathya

    Your poems are the aromatic garnishing enlivening any thread.
    Loved that line: "or at least keep hearts warm".

    :waveBest Wishes
    VS
     
  6. varudhini

    varudhini Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Tamildownunder

    Poetic marvel with full of energies and forces. Keep it up. Do post some more.

    Regards
    Varudhini
     
  7. varudhini

    varudhini Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Tamildownunder

    Poetic marvel with full of energies and forces. Keep it up. Do post some more.

    Regards
    Varudhini
     
  8. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Tamildownunder...

    You sure are an odist, a modern one at that, nice lines.
    Yes, Indian women are all that and more, they are electrifying...one cannot step on the line:)

    Satya, your verse was very good too, keep them coming.

    L, Kamla
     
  9. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Thank you all for your appreciation. Indian woman has inspired me to write this poem for Valentine's Day. Have a wonderful Valentine's Day.

    Satya, your lines are excellent.
     

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