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my luv 4 u

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chocoqueen, Dec 8, 2007.

  1. chocoqueen

    chocoqueen New IL'ite

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    i can feel u flowing thru my heart,
    u r sumwhere i cant see
    but i can feel u..
    little things we have done together,
    made me feel good,
    now ur far away from me but
    ur presence is still here,
    dont let me b away from u.

    i am coming,
    just keep me closer to u,
    i dont want to lose u,
    settle my luv by ur words..
    where r u how will i live without u.


    i kept thinking i know u,
    the distance that i covered 4 u,
    the smile u have showed me,
    the hope u have given me,
    the moment i thought i had it all,
    the love was never there first of all.

    the sweetness of love was all gone,
    ur unsaid words said it all,
    u silence shocked me,
    how could u do this to me,
    if u had nothin inside,
    why did u show it outside.

    now i close my eyes in pain,
    tears flow with a silence,
    u just made me feel waste,
    i do feel incomplete without u
    if i really love u,
    u will come back to find me,
    nothing is complete without luv
    but i know u will....
    i will find my true love in u.
    because i still love u forever....
    by love
     
  2. pammor

    pammor Senior IL'ite

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    Hello new Ilite,

    You have written a very sad poem..dont know if u have expressed your own hearts feelings....!!!
    Please be rest assured that you have posted this in a gathering of good women who will do anything when their sect is into sad feelings.This is a good forum if you have a real problem.If u write poems it will be just enjoyed and left un noticed.
    Please feel free to write to the moderator/administrator in case u hav a real problem of life.Here we have good senior women from all walks of life who can give u some constructive help.
    Pam
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice wordings Chocoqueen
    Love coming out of a broken heart.
     
  4. Ria2006

    Ria2006 Silver IL'ite

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    ChocoQueen..

    Indeed a touching poem. I know what situtaion you are in.
    I would not force my wisdom on you..

    But people who leave us in this situation are better left sooner than later. Any time wasted with these kind of people are waste of yourself. So whenever someone makes you feel this way, treat this as red flag for a relationship.
    A true love will never make you cry, one who makes you cry was never love from the beginning. So let the wounds plead, cry and shout. Soon you will emerge stronger than ever.

    Best Wishes
    Ria
     
  5. Meenaneelakantan

    Meenaneelakantan Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi

    Urs is so touchy..And whatever situation you are in, dont forget to rememeber dat, THIS TOO WILL PASS..

    Love
    Meena
     
  6. sanskrity

    sanskrity New IL'ite

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    Very touchy poem.....nicely expressed....Good one....

    If u ve imagined such a situation and transformed into a poem....then its really awesome.....BUT if it is ur own situation then i would suggest not to waste ur precious time in thinking about these kind of people as our world is a vast one and we do have lots of nice people in it........

    Keep Smiling :)....Take care...
     
  7. Gowri66

    Gowri66 Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Chocoqueen,

    With tears in my eyes, I am commenting you, dear.
    Past is past, leave everything aside.... think about present and future...

    Our best wishes are there for you, always ...

    Take care...
     
  8. shvap_786

    shvap_786 Gold IL'ite

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    hi chocoqueen...

    ur poem is good... but shows ur feeling too... u always have a better tomm... all the best for ur future...
     
  9. Saahithya

    Saahithya Silver IL'ite

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    chocoqueen

    i was in tears by the time i completed reading your poem...may god give you peace of mind and the love you always deserved....
     

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