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My Lovely Garden

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SuiDhaaga, Sep 23, 2021.

  1. SuiDhaaga

    SuiDhaaga Platinum IL'ite

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    I wish to grow a rose garden
    With many different flowers
    Their color and beauty
    Will give me so many powers

    I wish to plant purple flowers
    Of different kinds
    To decorate my home
    Or to fasten my hair from behind

    I welcome many a butterfly
    You can try try try
    But you can never catch them
    Perhaps you daydream, staring
    Into the deep blue sky

    My garden will be surrounded
    By a white fence
    It’s outer perimeter will be guarded
    By strong Men who
    At a moment’s notice
    Will come to our defense

    My beautiful garden
    Will have a lovely fountain
    For sweet birds to bathe and drink

    My beautiful garden
    Will be an oasis
    Where one can meditate and think

    My lovely garden is yet to be
    Right now this secret is.
    Between you and me
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

    Thyagarajan IL Hall of Fame

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    Kudos to you for having a vicarious look and having a stroll with a Dream Partner.
    I read it from bottom to top and once again from top to bottom. The ebbing emotions are great.
    I too felt the epilogue as prologue and prologue as epilogue.
    The concluding verse is the clincher.
    God Bless.
     
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