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My bride to be

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamildownunder, Sep 7, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear ILites,

    This is a poem I wrote long back as a bachelor. Ofcourse, it has no relevance now to me. But, I wanted to share with you as a poem.

    Regards,

    TDU

    I am not concerned about your colour
    In this you will find me very fair
    Together we will paint the town red

    I am not concerned about your height
    Among men you will find me tall
    Together we will find no happiness short

    I am not concerned about your caste
    All human beings are of the same cast
    Together we will show it is a thing of the past

    I am not concerned about your past
    I want you to give me your present
    Together we will dream of a future
     
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  2. malspie

    malspie Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi Raman

    Your poetry is very romantic, but, how come you searched for that peice now.... :)

    Don't take it to heart and start crying. Its a joke... o.k.
     
  3. rajmiarun

    rajmiarun Gold IL'ite

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    If all bachelors think so, all girls will have great men for husbands. Hats off to you. Hope you are acting just the same:wink: as you have written.
     
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    Shobanag Bronze IL'ite

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    TDU - quite the romantic, aren't you?:tongue Very sweet - hope your "your bride to be" appreciated it!!
     
  5. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    TDU Sir,
    Very nice poem. My question is did you show it your wife and what was her reaction to it ?
    Sriniketan
     
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    Sravanthi28 Silver IL'ite

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    Hi,
    Very nice poem. Really very practical.

    Sravanthi
     
  7. madhu11

    madhu11 Bronze IL'ite

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    wow!!! A very nice poem.
     
  8. slp807

    slp807 Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear TDU sir,

    very Romantic poem!!!
     
  9. mithili

    mithili New IL'ite

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    sir,
    i know u can't be the same everytime..life has to take change...!am going to copy this poem for my hubby..pls don tmind... i think u can even try it on ur darling!it may recall all ur efforts on her....... back!!!!! ....and may be she may not respond to u in the same way....and if shedoesnt pls dont scold me..........if she does may be u have to give me a party........!:2thumbsup: good one...
     
  10. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi tdu,

    Looks like forced bachelorhood is also having few charms..like your recollecting your good old bachelor days...

    A very simple and practical expectations....

    Hope Mrs.sheela is very proud of you now...
     

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