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may 14th

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sathya, May 4, 2007.

  1. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello

    athu migavum siriya veedu...........................a small little home
    saappaattu arai thoongum arai....................no separate dining bedroom
    bathroom enru thani thani .........................bathroom
    araigal kidayaathu...........................
    jannalum irunthathaaga ..............................no windows either
    ninaivillai
    anaal ...........................................................but
    santhoshathirku kuraivillai..........................there was lots of excitement & joy
    neechaladithathundu..................................swimming
    vithavithamana unavugal.............................lots of eats
    enneram vendumaanalum.............................
    thoongalam vilayadalam.............................to sleep play anytime
    inimayana paattu ........................................melodious songs
    kathai ketkalaam........................................stories that stir
    vaadagai koduthathaaga ............................wonder if paid any rent?
    theriyavillai
    inraya vegamaana ulagil...............................in todays fast world
    santhoshamaaga irukkumpothum................be it happy excited or
    satre pathattamaga irukkumpothum...........when you are down worried
    pathungikkolla antha arai............................confused and would like to
    irukkaatha enru thonrugirathu....................take refuge in that home
    arai ennavo kaali thaan................................the room is still empty
    naamthaan valarnthu ..................................but we have lost
    thoppulkodi thiravukol.................................the umblical cord key
    tholaithuvittom
    ammavin karuvaraikku..................................to our mother's womb

    like it?
    sathya

    too early for mothers day i know...but maybe busy with a marriage

    sathya
     
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  2. radhavenkatesh

    radhavenkatesh Silver IL'ite

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    :)
    yes we can never repay the debt of our mothers who have given birth to us sheltered us in their wombs for nine months and also who support us till they are alive
    happy mothers day.
     
  3. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Sathya,
    That was a beautiful poem. If only we could get back to that "ARAi" and start all over again!
    pathungikkolla antha arai............................confused and would like to
    irukkaatha enru thonrugirathu....................take refuge in that home
    arai ennavo kaali thaan................................the room is still empty
    naamthaan valarnthu ..................................but we have lost
    thoppulkodi thiravukol.................................the umblical cord key
    tholaithuvittom
    ammavin karuvaraikku..................................to our mother's womb



    Beautiful lines and touchy too.It brought tears in my eyes.
    Rgds,
    Malathi
     
  4. sudhavnarasimhan

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    dear Sathya,

    Good thoughts on Mother's day......i dont remember ever reading anything on this ARAI, the womb of a mother.....great !
    Happy Mother's Day to all !
     
  5. sujathae

    sujathae Senior IL'ite

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    Dear Sathya, That was great. Many forget the greatness of that "Arai" and just don't mind kicking that out when their needs are fulfilled. Your poem has given a good reminder for such people. Happy Mother's Day to all the sweet mothers and the mothers-to-be.
    Thanks and regards, Sujatha
     
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  6. sathya

    sathya Gold IL'ite

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    hello radha, malathi sudha and sujatha

    thank you for your lovely words...
    my mom was so happy when i read out this... to her...the write up is one year old..wrote it last year for mothers day...!!

    i also liked my words...arai ennavo kaali thaan.....thoppil kodi thiravukol tholaithuvittom...


    sathya
     
    Last edited: May 17, 2007
  7. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    hey sathya,
    i read this out to her just 2days back and she looked happy and smiling have to admit may be amnesia....not our mom though, but she smiled all the way amused...sk
     

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