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  1. Deepu04

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    Interesting story Nisha ... Keep writing
     
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    thk u deepu :)
     
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    Interesting story..Going good...
     
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    thnk u rith
     
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    #3

    nisha just go on thinking what happen to her and what she did:disappointed: she became very tensed and confused :disrelieved:than:coldsweat:[​IMG] she tried calling Jyothi and told her whole story what as happen[​IMG]:nomouth:


    Hello Jo-Nisha

    Ha nisha tell –Jyothi

    Joo, I want to say you something that happened today:frown: –Nisha

    Ha say –Jyothi

    Joo actually you know na I go with vinuth daily and he drop me till my tuition –Nisha

    Ha yeah so , what happened now ?-Jyothi

    I was talking to him and when I am talking Archana saw us and she was in angry and shouted at me very angrily like mad I don’t know what happen to her:( –Nisha

    Nisha I want to say something to you:neutral: –Jyothi

    Ha say what is that-Nisha

    Archana having crush on vinuth from so many days since they both r in the same department they both are very close and don’t know what happen they stop talking to each other and got misunderstanding:argue: in between them –Jyothi

    Aaaa I never know this she never said me why ? :flushed:and I though we are friends –nisha

    Nisha b clam okay she just told me and no one she didn’t share with you because if you come to know all these things you will directly ask them what happen but she doesn't want that thing :nomouth:–Jyothi

    Fine so she don't even treat me like a friend she didn’t share anything with me:pensive: –nisha

    Nisha stop now you don’t understand what happen so be calm will talk in office and I will ask her what happen to her –Jyothi

    Fine will meet in office bye-nisha


    Nisha didn’t concentrate on class she is like body present mind absent there are lot many things rolling in her mind she is just thinking why Archana didn’t say and at least vinuth would have told na what happening in office I don’t understand did I came in between them hoo god what happening with me why all this mess:smash2: I don’t know I think do I made mistake ah what I am big fool seriously:facepalm:


    Hey nisha –sangeetha

    Nisha didn’t hear anything that Sangeetha said she is just thinking what will happen tomorrow what wrong she did

    Nisha Sangeetha pushed her and called again

    Ha ha Sangeetha say, what happen :neutral:–nisha

    Nisha what happen to you where are you is everything alright ? Sangeetha

    Ha yeah I hope so :frown:–nisha

    What hope so you got mad ah what-sangeetha

    No no nothing I am actually not feeling:shakehead: well I want to go home:buenrollo: –nisha

    Fine then go take care-Sangeetha


    Sir, I wanted to go home I'm not feeling well can I go home please –nisha

    Sure nisha you can but please take notes from anyone of your friends –sir

    Yeah sure sir ,thank you –nisha


    Bye bye Sangeeta-nisha

    Bye take care call r text me when you reach home-Sangeetha




    Next day nisha got up and got ready her face is like that she didn’t have sleep for so many days :persevere:and her eyes are like waiting for sleep she completed her work and started to office

    She reached office and she went to her cabin sat for some time and tried to see whether Jyothi came but she could not see anyone Jyothi ,Archana ,vinuth no one came yet


    She sat n her place and again go on thinking on the same topic:sconf:
     
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    After sometimes office is filled with many people everyone came on time and started there work

    Nisha kept quite since its working time

    in a lunch break, everyone met and nisha said hi to Jyothi and Archana Jyothi greeted but Archana didn’t say anything

    Jyothi started the conversation saying ha nisha what happen to you yesterday you were saying something
    yeah I don’t know why Archana is angry on me so ask her –Archana
    ask me what you don’t know what you did –Archana
    I seriously don’t know what happened and I promise I don’t know anything that you both had crush r any kinda relationship-Nisha
    Relationship cruch no ways I don’t even like that guy nd remember he proposed me not me –Archana
    What he proposed you ah that’s good what u said him-Nisha
    What will I say I didn’t say him anything-Archana
    Ok fine now I got to know the truth na that how much importance you give me –Nisha
    Importance what are you talking nisha-Archana
    You didn’t even felt to say me once what happen between you both –Nisha
    What happen nothing happen okay it's better to forget everything-Archana
    Ok fine –nisha
    But nisha I want you to promise me one thing-Archana
    Yeah I will what is that-nisha
    Please stop going with vinuth you don’t know about him much I know everything I am saying this only for your good –archana
    Why ? what will happen if I go with him-nisha
    If you’re my friend listen to me and do or your wish I am least bothered and I will never treat you like my friend –archana
    Ok fine let forget and have lunch –nisha
    Hmmm I think everything is set now –jyothi
    Hmm yeah –nisha

    All three had their lunch and they started to work

    Hi nisha –vinuth
    Oh hi I didn’t see you –nisha
    Ha what happen to you and did you had your lunch –vinuth
    Ha yeah just completed can I talk to you later I am bit busy –nisha
    Ooo ok m sorry –vinuth
    No that’s ok –nisha
    Bye –vinuth
    Bye bye-nisha

    Nisha started ignoring vinuth as suggested by Archana and in evening nisha didn’t go with vinuth since vinuth is waiting for her in parking lot

    Nisha started early and went off to her tuition place

    Vinuth got surprised to see that nisha didn’t even say nothing and just went off she didn’t even speak anything in office ,he took his phone and tried calling nisha
    Nisha didn’t pick the call his and he goon calling her for 2 , 3 times for the fourth time she picked and said hello who is this?
    Stop acting smart ok you don’t know who am I ? –vinuth
    Then why you didn’t pick my call on fist ring-vinuth
    M sorry I don’t who you're –nisha
    Stop nisha I am vinuth and you know why I called you –vinuth
    Why you called me –nisha
    Because I am waiting for you in parking lot-vinuth
    Ooo sorry I already reached tuition place-nisha
    You would had told me na what happen to you –vinuth
    Nisha disconnected the call
    Vinuth again called her and she picked on the first ring
    Nisha I am talking to you and do you think this is a joke-vinuth
    Joke ha yeah you and Archana played a joke with me na –nisha
    What the hell Archana and me what you mean by that –vinuth
    Archana told me everything –nisha
    What she told –vinuth
    That you and she having crush and got misunderstanding for something and all-nisha
    And you trusted her –nisha
    Yeah because she is my friend –nisha
    Friend , bull shite –vinuth
    She is not your friend ok she doesn't even like you nisha- vinuth
     
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    Story is moving nicely dear. Just a small suggestion, check for the grammatical errors dear.
     
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    Good going Nisha!! I feel this Archana is bluffing!! Waiting to know what next
     
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    Very interesting Nisha ... Keep writing
     
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    oo yeah sreeram i will improve this is my first story and i am trying to discrib evrythng bt not happening :( i wish i do v well
     
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