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Life is not a bed of roses

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by iyerviji, Nov 6, 2013.

  1. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Life is not a bed of roses
    You have to struggle in life to get something
    When you struggle and getthen only you know thevalue

    Elders are always there to give advice
    Its not always that youngsters want to follow their advice
    something youngsters also want to say something
    but only some elders listen to them

    We always have to look down to see the sufferings
    then we feel we are much better than them
    but though I see the sufferings and try to help whenever I can
    I always like to look up also to come upin life

    Each one of us have a way of living all are not thesame
    Some enjoy outing and like to enjoy life in and out
    but some like to be at home only and enjoy life
    spending their time in praying
    and expect others also to do the same

    Always experienced that God gives problems to those
    whom he likes very much as he knows they only
    will try to solve the problems and be happy

    Of late God is giving me different kind of problems
    I am also used to problem from childhood
    so dont give up and find a way to solve those problems
    still God tries my patience , He does not know that
    I dont want to be a patient but I have lot of patience

    So dearies how do you like my poem
    if you like th epoem give like
    if you enjoyed reading the poem
    then give me your valuable comment

    Take care and havea nice day
     
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  2. luckysangeetha

    luckysangeetha Gold IL'ite

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    very good one Viji ma.... Still need to improve in the way of rythymatic way for a poem I guess... my suggestion
     
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  3. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Sangeeta dear for your first like and fb. Thanks for your suggestion but it is difficult to get a peom with ryhming , so whatever came to mind posted
     
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    adinil Silver IL'ite

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    wonderful viji maa
    how was you diwali :)
     
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    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Viji Maa...I liked these lines a lot..I live my daily life too with the same notion that god loves me too much:)..and is making me struggle for a particular reason...was nice reading your post...
     
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    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Aditi , my Diwali was ok
     
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    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Scorpio dear glad you liked the post, thanks for your visit
     
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    rajinitk4 IL Hall of Fame

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    Loved your poem vijima.
     
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    Rajini dear glad to know you liked my poem, :thankyou2:
     
  10. meenueash

    meenueash Platinum IL'ite

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    i like your poem with beautiful message
     
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