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kuch dilse

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ruchvarsh, Apr 26, 2007.

  1. ruchvarsh

    ruchvarsh New IL'ite

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    mera chand aaj kisi aur key pahloo mey hoga ..
    yeh jaantey hain hum..
    un aakhon mein kisi aur ka chehra hoga ..
    yeh jantey hain hum..
    vo dil jo humara tha aaj kisi aur ka hoga..
    yeh jaantey hain hum..
    vo saason ki khusboo ab kisi aur key liye hogi,
    yeh jaantey hain hum..
    vo baahon key narm ghanerey ab kisi aur key liye hongey
    yeh jaantey hain hum..
    vo dhadakta dil kisi aur ka naam leta hoga ..
    yeh jaantey hain hum..
    jo mera ho sakta tha ab kisi aur ka hoga..
    yeh jaantey hain hum..
    yeh dil aaj bhi tumharey naam sey dhadak jata hai,
    yeh aakhein bheed mein tanhai mein ab bhi tumhey dhood ti hain,
    hum aaj bhi tumhey chahtey hain.....
    kyaaa...
    yeh jaantey ho tum......
     
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  2. chitrajan

    chitrajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi Ruchi,

    I liked your poem and here is mine - forgive my spellings because I am not very proficient in Hindi and correct me where I am wrong

    ज़िंदगी की किसी मोड़ पे
    बिछड़ गये हो तुम
    अगर वोह आज़भी हस्ती खिलती
    उसमे ख़ुश रेहना तुम

    ख़ुशी है प्यार मिलने से
    पर ज़िंदगी है प्यार देने मे
    जितना प्यार दोगे तुम
    प्यार न होगा कम

    मिलन की समय रही थी कम
    ख़ुशी की ज़्यादा और ग़म की कम
    ये तो सोचो याद थे अच्छे
    यहीं रीत ज़िंदगी के सच्चे

    न मिलने से उसकी साथ
    न रेहना तुम उधास
    रास्ते अलग हो गये होंगे
    पेहली प्यार तुम्ही रहोगे

    चित्रा
    29-4-2007
     
  3. Chitvish

    Chitvish Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Chitra,
    Your poem is beautiful.
    I loved best
    ख़ुशी है प्यार मिलने से
    पर ज़िंदगी है प्यार देने मे

    रास्ते अलग हो गये होंगे
    पेहली प्यार तुम्ही रहोगे




    There seems to be a poetess sitting within you, coming out in tamil & hindi.
    Great going !
    Love to Chitra
    From,
    Chithra.
     
    Last edited: May 2, 2007
  4. ruchvarsh

    ruchvarsh New IL'ite

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    beautiful ...... and inspiring too. really lovely.:)


     
  5. anjana

    anjana Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Chitrajan,

    That was sure a wonderful poem straight from heart. I miss reading your Tamil poems:oops: do post more in Hindi.

    Love,
     
  6. chitrajan

    chitrajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Ruch and Anjana,

    Thank you very much.

    Since I have learnt to read and write in Hindi only upto Class 7 and my knowledge has been brushed up by watching movies and serials, I am not very confident in.

    This was a sudden outburst . But I will keep trying.
     
  7. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    DearChitrajan,

    I am amzed at your vituosity in writting Tamil and Hindi poems. Keep it up amd post manymore poems.

    Regards,
    TDU


    many
     
  8. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    DearRuchhi,

    Your poem is very good. It reflects the pain in heart of love lost. I can only modify the famous hindi saying as,

    Pyar pyar me lenevalon ki dil likha hai.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  9. chitrajan

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    Dear TDU,

    Thanks for your encouraging words.
     
  10. radhavenkatesh

    radhavenkatesh Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear ruch
    no words to express ur feelings

    yeh dil aaj bhi tumharey naam sey dhadak jata hai,
    yeh aakhein bheed mein tanhai mein ab bhi tumhey dhood ti hain,
    hum aaj bhi tumhey chahtey hain.....

    jab kisi pei dil aajata hai woh dhadkte hei rehta hai unke liye
    lekin jinko jana hai woh chhod ke jate nahin na !
     
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