mera chand aaj kisi aur key pahloo mey hoga .. yeh jaantey hain hum.. un aakhon mein kisi aur ka chehra hoga .. yeh jantey hain hum.. vo dil jo humara tha aaj kisi aur ka hoga.. yeh jaantey hain hum.. vo saason ki khusboo ab kisi aur key liye hogi, yeh jaantey hain hum.. vo baahon key narm ghanerey ab kisi aur key liye hongey yeh jaantey hain hum.. vo dhadakta dil kisi aur ka naam leta hoga .. yeh jaantey hain hum.. jo mera ho sakta tha ab kisi aur ka hoga.. yeh jaantey hain hum.. yeh dil aaj bhi tumharey naam sey dhadak jata hai, yeh aakhein bheed mein tanhai mein ab bhi tumhey dhood ti hain, hum aaj bhi tumhey chahtey hain..... kyaaa... yeh jaantey ho tum......
Hi Ruchi, I liked your poem and here is mine - forgive my spellings because I am not very proficient in Hindi and correct me where I am wrong ज़िंदगी की किसी मोड़ पे बिछड़ गये हो तुम अगर वोह आज़भी हस्ती खिलती उसमे ख़ुश रेहना तुम ख़ुशी है प्यार मिलने से पर ज़िंदगी है प्यार देने मे जितना प्यार दोगे तुम प्यार न होगा कम मिलन की समय रही थी कम ख़ुशी की ज़्यादा और ग़म की कम ये तो सोचो याद थे अच्छे यहीं रीत ज़िंदगी के सच्चे न मिलने से उसकी साथ न रेहना तुम उधास रास्ते अलग हो गये होंगे पेहली प्यार तुम्ही रहोगे चित्रा 29-4-2007
Dear Chitra, Your poem is beautiful. I loved best ख़ुशी है प्यार मिलने से पर ज़िंदगी है प्यार देने मे रास्ते अलग हो गये होंगे पेहली प्यार तुम्ही रहोगे There seems to be a poetess sitting within you, coming out in tamil & hindi. Great going ! Love to Chitra From, Chithra.
Dear Chitrajan, That was sure a wonderful poem straight from heart. I miss reading your Tamil poems do post more in Hindi. Love,
Dear Ruch and Anjana, Thank you very much. Since I have learnt to read and write in Hindi only upto Class 7 and my knowledge has been brushed up by watching movies and serials, I am not very confident in. This was a sudden outburst . But I will keep trying.
DearChitrajan, I am amzed at your vituosity in writting Tamil and Hindi poems. Keep it up amd post manymore poems. Regards, TDU many
DearRuchhi, Your poem is very good. It reflects the pain in heart of love lost. I can only modify the famous hindi saying as, Pyar pyar me lenevalon ki dil likha hai. Regards, TDU
Dear ruch no words to express ur feelings yeh dil aaj bhi tumharey naam sey dhadak jata hai, yeh aakhein bheed mein tanhai mein ab bhi tumhey dhood ti hain, hum aaj bhi tumhey chahtey hain..... jab kisi pei dil aajata hai woh dhadkte hei rehta hai unke liye lekin jinko jana hai woh chhod ke jate nahin na !