kuch dilse

Hi Ruchi,

I liked your poem and here is mine - forgive my spellings because I am not very proficient in Hindi and correct me where I am wrong

ज़िंदगी की किसी मोड़ पे
बिछड़ गये हो तुम
अगर वोह आज़भी हस्ती खिलती
उसमे ख़ुश रेहना तुम
ख़ुशी है प्यार मिलने से
पर ज़िंदगी है प्यार देने मे
जितना प्यार दोगे तुम
प्यार न होगा कम
मिलन की समय रही थी कम
ख़ुशी की ज़्यादा और ग़म की कम
ये तो सोचो याद थे अच्छे
यहीं रीत ज़िंदगी के सच्चे
न मिलने से उसकी साथ
न रेहना तुम उधास
रास्ते अलग हो गये होंगे
पेहली प्यार तुम्ही रहोगे
चित्रा
29-4-2007

 

Dear Chitra,
Your poem is beautiful.
I loved best
ख़ुशी है प्यार मिलने से
पर ज़िंदगी है प्यार देने मे

रास्ते अलग हो गये होंगे
पेहली प्यार तुम्ही रहोगे



There seems to be a poetess sitting within you, coming out in tamil & hindi.
Great going !
Love to Chitra
From,
Chithra.

 

Dear Chitrajan,

That was sure a wonderful poem straight from heart. I miss reading your Tamil poems do post more in Hindi.

Love,

 

Dear Ruch and Anjana,

Thank you very much.

Since I have learnt to read and write in Hindi only upto Class 7 and my knowledge has been brushed up by watching movies and serials, I am not very confident in.

This was a sudden outburst . But I will keep trying.

 

DearChitrajan,

I am amzed at your vituosity in writting Tamil and Hindi poems. Keep it up amd post manymore poems.

Regards,
TDU


many

 

DearRuchhi,

Your poem is very good. It reflects the pain in heart of love lost. I can only modify the famous hindi saying as,

Pyar pyar me lenevalon ki dil likha hai.

Regards,

TDU

 

Dear TDU,

Thanks for your encouraging words.

 

Dear ruch
no words to express ur feelings

yeh dil aaj bhi tumharey naam sey dhadak jata hai,
yeh aakhein bheed mein tanhai mein ab bhi tumhey dhood ti hain,
hum aaj bhi tumhey chahtey hain.....

jab kisi pei dil aajata hai woh dhadkte hei rehta hai unke liye
lekin jinko jana hai woh chhod ke jate nahin na !