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I wish to repay!!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Devika Menon, Jan 23, 2009.

  1. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    I wish to repay

    I wish to repay the loan of love ,
    That in abundance Ive got from you.

    I wish to repay the insurance of trust,
    That every step of life held true.

    I wish to repay the credit of respect,
    That helped me grow so strong.

    I wish to repay the guidance you gave,
    That helped me to right the wrong.

    I wish to repay this life that I lived,
    That would have been a punishment

    If you hadn’t entered the scene,
    While it almost reached the end.

    How can I repay I wondered ,and then I prayed,
    That if there be a choice given for the next life ,

    I pray that I be born as you and you as me,
    That my heartfelt request to repay be fulfilled by destiny!

    Love,
    Devika








     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    Wow DM,

    I am bowled over by your repaying schedule.
    Is it possible..

    Great feeling..buddy...loved it...
     
  3. Chitvish

    Chitvish Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Mole,

    I thought my life was empty,
    BUT
    You made the same full!

    I thought I was nobody,
    BUT
    You made me feel I am somebody!

    I was searching for happiness
    BUT
    You gave me nothing but bliss!

    I thought, why, none to own me?
    BUT
    You overwhelmed me as part of you!

    I was mumbling and grumbling,
    BUT
    You are my sunrise and my mist vanished!

    I now have a shift in vision,
    Not mine and yours – simply one!

    Friend, sibling, lover,
    Any relationship pales before you!

    Love,
    Chithra.
     
  4. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Thanks Shan and glad to recieve the first Fb from you.

    Wish it were possible. If it were I think the best way is to take his place next birth so that I could give him all the joy he has given me.

    Glad you liked it Shan.

    Love,
    DM
     
  5. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Devika

    What a nice thought and a lovely poem. Hope your wish comes true.
    All the best.

    love
    viji
     
  6. jaishree9

    jaishree9 Silver IL'ite

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    Hey Debs
    Pyar meh sauda nahi
    deti hai dil dey badle meh dil lay.
    Beautiful thoughts.
     
  7. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Ma'am,

    Straight from the heart!!Great lines there Ma'am.

    This singular vision,
    With love sans condition,
    The holy transaction,
    The beautiful relation.....

    Thanks for the lovely input Ma'am.

    Love,
    Your Mol
     
  8. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Viji,

    Good to see you here.

    I need your blessings Viji and thats all I will ever want for these wishes to come true. Thankyou:)

    Glad you liked the poem.

    Love,
    Devika
     
  9. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Heyyyyy Jaiiii,


    You reminded me of this beautiful song yaar. I have been humming it since i read your Fb. how true na.
    Na mangu sona chandi , na mangu hira moti,yeh tho hain kis kaam ke....... ge ge ge ge ge ge re saiba pyar main sauda nahin.

    Thankyou so much for visiting here Jaiii.

    Love,
    Debs
     
  10. Haasinii

    Haasinii Bronze IL'ite

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    woww.....what a wish....and what a wonderful way of repaying back....

    devika

    wonderful poem simple yet conveyed the meaning in the most heart touchign way...thanks for sharing
     

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