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I miss you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by babyish, Nov 4, 2007.

  1. babyish

    babyish New IL'ite

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    I MISS YOU

    Lost in the midst of dark clouds,

    i can see you through the sky,

    dazzling, shining my little star,

    i want to get you in my arms.

    Is there a way i reach to you,

    can i touch you, have a feel of you?

    My little star gone so far away,

    leaving me to sob all the way.

    Come and hug me give me your feel,

    how can i live with a pinch in my heart?

    You were a ray of light and hope,

    i feel my heart and soul has eloped.
     
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  2. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Very touching poem, nicely expressed! Babyish!

    sriniketan
     
  3. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi babyish,

    Very beautifully expressed..

    hope you can hold your little star in your arms all the time...
     
  4. babyish

    babyish New IL'ite

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    hi Sriniket,

    thanks for the response.
     
  5. babyish

    babyish New IL'ite

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    hi Shanvy,

    i wish ur hope come true for me
     
  6. Reenae

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    HI Bayish,

    hmmm, touching to the core...

    regards
     
  7. Shanvy

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    hey babyish,

    With my whole heart i wish the same..amen.....
     
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    DEAR BABYLISH,
    if love is strong ,we all will find our lucky star,surely...the strength is when u believe in it...may almighty help u to keep ur little star closer to ur heart.ur post is very beautiful!!!
    keep posting!
     
  9. Tamildownunder

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    Dear babyish,

    Nice poem with excellent words. Keep posting. All the best.

    Regards,

    TDU
     

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