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Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Jun 25, 2009.

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  1. Jun 26, 2009 #11
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Mindi,

    Kaisa laga mera lover boy;)

    Good to know you love rains too:) His entry is always such a respite..:)

    Thankyou so much yaar for joinin me. You always manage to make me smile:))

    Love,
    Devs
     
    Devika Menon, Jun 26, 2009
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  2. Jun 26, 2009 #12
    Paulina

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    My dear Devikutty,

    Here you are the 'Bard of IL' in action ! Truly a masterpiece you have presented here.
    I read with a racing heart your 'over the board passionate lines ' and almost yelled out to the Censor Board ( ha ha ha ) and wondered who else I'll have to approach to give you a little ear tweaking( the strict mommy in me doing her duty by her naughty daughter !) at the rate at which you were turning the lines BLUE !!! Mighty relieved to learn at the end of it all that this was a magnificient poetic flight of fancy on the RAIN GOD who evoked all this passion .
    Fantastic poem ....I could visualise you enjoying the pitter patter raindrops at first and later allowing yourself to be drenched to the core and finally laughing at all who read this with a one track mind like I did !!
    You have really excelled yourself here....encore ! encore!
    love,
    Paulina
     
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  3. Jun 26, 2009 #13
    sathya

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    hello devika
    the heading got me
    reading fast
    dare i read the last line first?
    but words spun
    spellbound
    i had to read each line
    as it caressed the lines
    strong
    lovely lines
    that bring rain..
    sure the rain god
    must be happy now
    theres someone
    whose heart strings
    he can pull or caress...

    sathya
     
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  4. Jun 26, 2009 #14
    Sriniketan

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    Suspense maintained till the end Devika. in introducing your lover.
    Add me in the list of lovers..hehe..

    sriniketan
     
    Sriniketan, Jun 26, 2009
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  5. Jun 26, 2009 #15
    AkilaMani

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    Dear devika,

    great poem.... beautifully written........ the title caught my attention..... of course, i though just as u had intended all the readers to think.... brilliant.... the passionate lines just kept me glued till the end....
     
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  6. Jun 26, 2009 #16
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Dear Chechi,

    What a treat it is to see you here!!:)

    Oops so my 'passionate revelation' caught you eh? hehehe.. Thank God my ears are saved:biglaugh

    Wow Chechi your words are so very motivating as always.. Love them and love you for always being there to encourage me:)

    Love,
    Devikutty
     
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  7. Jun 27, 2009 #17
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Sathya,

    So lovely to have you here:) And your poem is as always excellent:)

    Yeah Im glad the rain God finally decided to bless us with some lovely much required showers.

    Glad you liked the poem.:)

    Love,
    Devika
     
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  8. Jun 27, 2009 #18
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Srini,

    Good to see you here:)


    Hmmm so you love him too eh?? Well surprisingly this time i dont mind sharing my lover....hehehe!!

    Thankyou for you joining me:)

    Love,
    Devika
     
    Devika Menon, Jun 27, 2009
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  9. Jun 27, 2009 #19
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Akila,

    This is indeed a treat to have you visit two of my blogs today.. Thankyou so very much:)

    Glad you liked the poem..your words are highly motivating... and im happy it produced the desired effect:)

    Love,
    Devika
     
    Devika Menon, Jun 27, 2009
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  10. Jun 27, 2009 #20
    SriVidya75

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    Dear Devika

    You are really a born writer...with a pinch of sweet and sour things....lovely poem and i thought it was about your husband :) again my bad guess...sweet way of praising the rain....

    keep sharing your work..thanks you brought a smile on my face....
     
    SriVidya75, Jun 27, 2009
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