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How Can I Forget My First Love - Story - Part VIII

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by malspie, Oct 6, 2007.

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  1. Oct 6, 2007 #11
    malspie

    malspie Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi Manju,

    Thanks for your kind words and for following up with my story...
     
    malspie, Oct 6, 2007
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  2. Oct 19, 2007 #12
    priyauc

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    Hi Mals,
    Real nice end. am happy that manilas life was not spoiled in getting entangled in the problems of having an affair with a married man. They had true and genuine love for each other which ended beautifully, only to live on forever.... true love and specially first love can never be forgotten, one can only treasre and cherish the wonderful momemts spent with the loved one!!!
     
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  3. Oct 19, 2007 #13
    vidhukumar

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    hey mals!i just now read the whole story,from part 1 to 8 ...very nicely written....short&sweet...waiting to hear more such stories from you!!!!
     
    vidhukumar, Oct 19, 2007
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  4. Oct 27, 2007 #14
    malspie

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    Hi Vandana, Shanvy, Sunkan, Manju, Priya

    I thank all of you for appreicating my humble work... I wanted to give you alll a boring long story before I set myself on CHUTTI... But unfortunately, the leave is extended only for IL.. as I am unable to post any reply .. All websites open but when it comes to IL, it opens with error on page and the replies do not seem to go through and this has happened on all the comps which is used to access before the server was upgraded.

    Today I have walked in to a CYBER CAFE and am posting sitting admist men who are very curious to know which site is this woman browsing and that too in a CAFE.. I can see all eyes on me... Care for Hoots...

    Too much to achieve in very little time.. see you all bye..
     
    malspie, Oct 27, 2007
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  5. Oct 27, 2007 #15
    malspie

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    Hi vidhu,

    Thanks for appreciating my story... Keep encouraging me ... ha ha..
     
    malspie, Oct 27, 2007
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  6. Oct 10, 2012 #16
    veeramachaneni

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    A very Nice story.
     
    veeramachaneni, Oct 10, 2012
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  7. Oct 10, 2012 #17
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    hi
    m new to this forum and not getting all the previous parts........i started with this part really eager to read the earlier ones'
     
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  8. Oct 10, 2012 #18
    shashiv

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    Oh really wonderful story... Nice ending.. Enjoyed very much... Keep writing more Mals...



    Shanti
     
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  9. Oct 10, 2012 #19
    phenox

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    now i get the chance to read the full story at one go..........its truely good n matured luv story
     
    phenox, Oct 10, 2012
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  10. Oct 11, 2012 #20
    ShruthiAKotian

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    Hello Malspie, though this story was 5yrs old, I read it today in a single shot..... What a lovely story....!!!!!! Kudos to you and your writing.. You have penned down very well...... :thumbsup
     
    ShruthiAKotian, Oct 11, 2012
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