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Ghosts of the royal family

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Catgol, Aug 25, 2014.

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  1. Nov 7, 2014 #491
    vsharma

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    This ending is nice catgol, thanks for keeping the readers engaged with your interesting story. Hope to read another story from you soon :)
     
    vsharma, Nov 7, 2014
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  2. Nov 7, 2014 #492
    padmaja909

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    thankyou catgol:thankyou2:
     
    padmaja909, Nov 7, 2014
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  3. Nov 7, 2014 #493
    rajinitk4

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    Oh catgol thank you for the happy ending.
     
    rajinitk4, Nov 7, 2014
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  4. Nov 7, 2014 #494
    Pallavi4me

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    catgol, I have never commented on the story as I entered very recently and read it fully only now.

    Infact, I liked the ending. This kind of ending for sure will linger in the minds of readers even after completing it. And For sure, I appreciate you for being very regular in updates and your interaction with many here. It shows your research too before penning each episode.

    I think you have changed the ending from what you have conceived initially. I kind of understand that and how it might have occurred to you. I also assume readers have expected some thing from Priya and his uncle in the climax. Because you have mentioned somewhere Priya is the one who is going to solve this problem and also you have talked about her uncle doing something in the climax. So that expectation led them to dissappointment, i think.

    But fellas, i think we must allow the writer the way she / he prefers it. She might have given a long thought before ending like this. And she also would have had many thoughts and many angels / many ways of ending to this story. If she has taken this way, there must a be strong liking / reason behind it. So let us encourage her and lets wait for the next story from her.

    Catgol, my personal view- with this ending, you can very well take up the sequel if you prefer and close the loose ends here and there with or without a 'live happily every after'.

    All the best.

    Edit: this is for the climax post #477.
     
    Pallavi4me, Nov 7, 2014
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  5. Nov 7, 2014 #495
    Pallavi4me

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    Catgol, my above post is for the first climax of the story.
     
    Pallavi4me, Nov 7, 2014
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  6. Nov 7, 2014 #496
    sumalynux

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    Dear Catgol


    I read complete chapters in one go..

    It was wonderful story... Even i was sad reading 1st ending, then was
    very happy to read final ending...


    All the best for your future stories.... Waiting for next story.....
     
    sumalynux, Nov 7, 2014
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  7. Nov 7, 2014 #497
    Catgol

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    Ah thank you Pallavi .. I changed it..
     
    Catgol, Nov 7, 2014
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  8. Nov 7, 2014 #498
    Catgol

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    Thank you Padmaja ,periamma , amusateesh , vsharma, Rajni , rajeni , littl, Kavitha Madhan , raji , evelrony, bliss of my life , arunarc , Sumalynux , Pallavi . Please apologise if I have left any names .. My heart felt thanks to all the readers who have been immense support and motivation .. I would also like to thank my husband who was very supportive from the beginning till the end and also my little two year old toddler who lets me write after he sleeps in the night :)
     
    Catgol, Nov 7, 2014
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  9. Nov 7, 2014 #499
    ammusatheesh

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    Great ending Catgol...thanks for considering our views and changing the end ...:cool2:
     
    ammusatheesh, Nov 7, 2014
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  10. Nov 7, 2014 #500
    Arunarc

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    Catgol That was awesome I thought Priya's uncle too has some role to play in the end.
    It was your narration and the way you write got all the readers hooked to your story.
    Hope we will get to read a new one very soon.:biggrin2:
     
    Arunarc, Nov 7, 2014
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