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From womb with Love !

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by Devika Menon, Mar 20, 2009.

  1. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    This is the journey of a little foetus. His journey through agony and ecstasy.

    I swim in this placental fluid, listening to your cries ,
    You have been duped by that man who I now despise

    My dear Mom , don’t cry, I wish I could hold you tight,
    Give you strength and say everything will be right.

    This man cursed you with me and fled,
    Used you then left when your love you spread.

    I blame myself , if it hadn’t just been for me,
    You wouldn’t be stifled you’d be free.

    Living in your sorrowful womb now I feel,
    When I am out I promise to help you heal.

    I can’t bear to feel your agony,
    My tiny hands beg you to have faith in me.

    What is that the sound of a man I hear?
    I will protect you Mommy, don’t fear.

    But looks like he’s come to give you love.,
    I knew God would send someone from heaven above.

    So finally with me cocooned in you,
    You’re now married , to a man so true.

    How much I want to kiss this man,
    Who held your hand while my father ran.

    But I’m glad soon in his arms I’ll land.
    And I’d love to call him my darling Dad......

    Love,
    Devika

     
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  2. shubhasiddharth

    shubhasiddharth Bronze IL'ite

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    Beautifully written Devika...Hats off to you!

    Love,
    Ashwini
     
  4. Jpatma

    Jpatma Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Devika,
    So lovely, let me continue .....

    Mom ! don't cry for the past
    Divine had better stored in future for you
    Everything happens for the best
    For lesson learnt in despair
    We are going to be part of better world
    Where pains are erased with smile in lips

    Devi mol ! why do i see you in Niev? Hugs and blessings.
    Jaya
     
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    AmritaPoorni Bronze IL'ite

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    swathi14 IL Hall of Fame

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    Devika,

    excellent feeling. superb writing. Keep it up.

    andal
     
  7. S Priya

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    Very well writen and the feelings flow through while we read great !
     
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    Mindian IL Hall of Fame

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    excellent devs,:thumbsup
    love
    Mindi
     
  9. Devika Menon

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    Thankyou so much dear Shubhasiddharth for the first comment to my blog.Glad you liked it dear!!

    Love,
    Devika
     
  10. Devika Menon

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    Dear Ashwini , glad you liked it Sweetie.

    Love,
    Devika
     

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