for my wedding Anniversary.. सप्रेम

सप्रेम

सोचा फूल दूँ...
लगा मुरझा जायेंगे,
कब तक हम दोनों के संग,
वो रह पाएंगे...

सोचा दूँ उपहार,
क्या हमेशा वो रह पाएंगे,
संभालोगे कितना भी तुम,
वो पुराने हो जायेंगे...

लगा संग चलूँ,
एक नई जगह पर,
क्या घर सा सुकून दे पाएंगे,
हम वापस चले आयेंगे..

तब पिरोई भावनाएं,
और बनायीं ये कविता,
एक प्रेम ही तो है ऐसा,
जिसे सप्रेम हमेशा दे पाएंगे..

I wanted to give my DH an anniversary gift... finally came up with this idea.
please,give your opinion...

with a wish ,
Wish@

 

Thanks a ton for wishes... here is the translation(i hope it can express as well)
with love
I though of giving flowers to you,
but i afraid,those will get dry,
how long will they stay along with us?

i thought of giving gifts to you,
but how long you can keep those same,
however care you'll take,
they will get old.....

then i thought of going a beautiful place with you,
but may that give comfort of home,
however we travel,
we have to come back home...

finally i thought to give a unique gift,
that is gift of my love,
because that is the only gift,
which i can give you whole life with love....

 

Thanks again dear...Best wishes to you tooo:thumbsup

 

hey sri...

i made a googlesite for him with our pics in past two years.. including a slideshow of 10 wedding pics..there are my few poems about different emotions..like love,thanks,hopes,care etc..and this was the last poem as gift of love...
he liked the whole thing and overwhelmed with emotions.. everything was quiet gr8..
As we had great celebration at 12 midnight..following a dinner on anniversary night on a roof top restaurant... it was magical..

hey custard,

you gave me an idea to post english translations of my hindi poems...so, it can access a wide range of readers..
thanks ..

with a wish.,
Wish@

 

hey sri...

i made a googlesite for him with our pics in past two years.. including a slideshow of 10 wedding pics..there are my few poems about different emotions..like love,thanks,hopes,care etc..and this was the last poem as gift of love...
he liked the whole thing and overwhelmed with emotions.. everything was quiet gr8..
As we had great celebration at 12 midnight..following a dinner on anniversary night on a roof top restaurant... it was magical..

with a wish.,
Wish@