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Flight of fantasy!!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Devika Menon, Mar 11, 2008.

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  1. Mar 11, 2008 #11
    sudhavnarasimhan

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    Dear Devika,
    That was really a Flight of fantasy...you made us fly high with the birds, with no thoughts of tomorrow! it was so relaxing....i could almost feel the breeze!


    keep it up!Bow
     
    sudhavnarasimhan, Mar 11, 2008
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  2. Mar 11, 2008 #12
    sudhavnarasimhan

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    dear Cheeniya,

    One more poem.....wow....good one . looking at the other side of the bird's life....ha ha , where Devika made us spread our wings and fly high on Her flights of fantasy, you brought us down with a THUD! Wow that hurt! So now you are talking thelanguage of teh birds, who envy mankind...ha ha ....it was good , that too in poetry form!
     
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  3. Mar 11, 2008 #13
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Sudha,

    Thankyou so much for your words of appreciation.... Would nt it be wonderful to actually soar high and experience the sky!!

    Regards,
    Devika


     
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  4. Mar 11, 2008 #14
    latamurali

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    Dear devika

    Very very nice one yaar.......i enjoyed..........all of u have become great poet yaar........toguh competition.......

    Sri sir........excellent one.........other side of bird's life...........

    edhu dhana...ekaraiku akkari pachai............

    Shanthi........nice thought by u.........

    I THINK PEOPLE LIKE ME ...UNFIT TO BE IN IL..........:hide:........GREAT WRITERS/ POETS/ BLOGGERS.........:bowdown:bowdown:bowdown:hatsoff:hatsoff:hatsoff to ALLLLLLL OF U.........
     
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  5. Mar 11, 2008 #15
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Lata,


    We dont just like you,WE LOVE YOU to be here. Writers, Bloggers, Poets are a plenty but a good soul like you is a rare find.Hats off to you for conceptualising the idea of celebrating IL in the orphanage and oldage home.

    Thankyou for your kind words of appreciation.


    Regards,
    Devika


    quote=latamurali;252961]Dear devika

    Very very nice one yaar.......i enjoyed..........all of u have become great poet yaar........toguh competition.......

    Sri sir........excellent one.........other side of bird's life...........

    edhu dhana...ekaraiku akkari pachai............

    Shanthi........nice thought by u.........

    I THINK PEOPLE LIKE ME ...UNFIT TO BE IN IL..........:hide:........GREAT WRITERS/ POETS/ BLOGGERS.........:bowdown:bowdown:bowdown:hatsoff:hatsoff:hatsoff to ALLLLLLL OF U.........[/quote]
     
    Devika Menon, Mar 11, 2008
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  6. Mar 12, 2008 #16
    ansh12

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    Hi Devika

    First I reda your poem and then Cheeniya Sir's. Both well written and thought provoking. But one thing is clear, everything can be viewed from two different prespective which is clear from the two peom. It seems bird is telling humna grass is always green on the other side.

    Well written

    Ansh
     
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  7. Mar 12, 2008 #17
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Ansh,

    Thanks for your comments . I am glad you liked it!!

    Love,
    Devika


     
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  8. Mar 13, 2008 #18
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    Very nice poem..well writeen. keep it up !
     
    Anandchitra, Mar 13, 2008
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  9. Mar 13, 2008 #19
    Devika Menon

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    Dear Anandchitra,

    Thankyou so much,

    Regards,
    Devika



     
    Devika Menon, Mar 13, 2008
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