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Emptiness

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamildownunder, May 31, 2007.

  1. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Emptiness in stomach can be filled
    Emptiness in throat can be quenched
    Emptiness in sight can be changed
    Emptiness in thoughts can be imagined
    Emptiness in heart?
     
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  2. chitrajan

    chitrajan Bronze IL'ite

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    TDU,

    Short and crisp as usual.

    Emptiness in the heart has to be filled by Love no doubt!!!!!
     
  3. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Chitrajan,

    Thanks for your compliments. You are right love can fill the emptiness provided it is successful.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  4. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    A very philosophical poem indeed.Short, sweet and deep too.
     
  5. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Malathijagan,

    Thanks for your appreciation. Vashistar vaayal brahma rishi pattam kidaitha maathiri irukku.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
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  6. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    oh, common Tamil!Don't put me on such a high pedestal by comparing me with Vasishtar! I stand no where near that great sage. It would be an insult to him! I am just another one like you. If you write well in Tamil, and I suppose I am competent enough to write good verses in English, but I do not want to claim that.Others should judge me.
     
  7. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Dear Tamil,
    So back with another short but deep poem.....well, like Chitra has said, Emptiness in heart can be quenched, filled, imagined and changed only by/with LOVE isn't it......:2thumbsup: ?!
     
  8. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Thanks, sudha. You are also back with your nice way of appreciation.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  9. sujathae

    sujathae Senior IL'ite

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    Dear TDU, Nice poem. Emptiness in heart can be filled by love and only love.

    thanks and regards,
    sujatha
     
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    aami New IL'ite

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    u have created a feeling thru ur 4 lines...emptiness in mind can be filled by love and only love.........:)

    aami!
     

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